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Some people say that e- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines. Th oehat extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that e- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines. Th oehat extend 5E9V
It is often argued that online newspapers and modern ammunition have gained gained high popularity and tend to totally replace paper books and magazines. As everything is available with one click online, readers can find variety of books through online websites. On the one hand, With the development of science and technology, e-books are favourable for both the readers and writers as well. As factors like technological convenience and environment can be taken into consideration. Moreover, people do not have to carry or wait for the paper, thus with a click of website they can easily gather knowledge same like that of books as well as magazines. Further, the deforestation have increased rapidly, cutting down trees for publishing books would be harmful for the environment. Therefore, e-books have become pocket-friendly and convenient to use. On the other hand, some people argue that e-books do not deliver same like as of the newspapers and magazines, where we can find a little of the statement or the news. In addition, feeling of buying books is quit different than searching the several online library. Thus, the concentration of the reader and the better understanding of the text lies in the printed books, where there are books available in the market and some of the ancient manuscripts which cannot be translated into online forms. Although, it has many impact on paper based books but the e-books are much preferred by the change of the present generation in modern days. In conclusion, I personally believe that both e-books and paper books have their own readers. Since, the present generation youngsters and adulthood are favouring for online newspapers as well as books through this they get comfortable with a click of website.
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argued that
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online
newspapers and modern ammunition have
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gained gained
high popularity and tend to
totally
replace paper
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books
and magazines. As everything is available with one click
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online
, readers can find variety of
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books
through
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online
websites. On the one hand, With the development of science and technology, e-books are
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favourable
for both the readers and writers
as well
. As factors like technological convenience and environment can
be taken
into consideration.
Moreover
,
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people
do not
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have to
carry or wait for the paper,
thus
with a click of website they can
easily
gather knowledge same like that of
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books
as well
as magazines.
Further
, the deforestation have increased
rapidly
, cutting down trees for publishing
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books
would be harmful for the environment.
Therefore
, e-books have become pocket-friendly and convenient to
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use
.
On the other hand
,
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some
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people
argue that e-books do not deliver same like as of the newspapers and magazines, where we can find a
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little
of the statement or the news.
In addition
, feeling of buying
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books
is quit
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different
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than
searching the several
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online
library.
Thus
, the concentration of the reader and the better understanding of the text lies in the printed
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books
, where there are
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books
available in the market and
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some of the
ancient manuscripts which cannot
be translated
into
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online
forms. Although, it has
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many
impact on paper based
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books
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but
the e-books are much preferred by the
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change
of the present generation in modern days.
In conclusion
, I
personally
believe that both e-books and paper
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books
have their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
readers. Since, the present generation youngsters and adulthood are
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favouring
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
newspapers
as well
as
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books
through this they
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get
comfortable with a click of website.
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IELTS essay Some people say that e- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines. Th oehat extend

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