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Some people say that cars are best to use in cities while others think that bicycles are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people say that cars are best to use in cities while others think that bicycles are better. 9xex
Nowadays, with increasing population the ways of transportation are raising too. Owing to this, it affects the environment by spreading pollution. Moreover, many think that the best way to travel is by car whereas other believe that use of bicyles is great. This essay elucidated both views in trailed paragraphs along with the opinion at the end. To embank with, generally cars are being used as the major mean of transportation. However, use of cars has several duawbacks. Firstly, it highly affect the environment by creating air and noise pollution. Moreover, traffic issues can be observed with rising number of car users. Owing to this, death in road mishaps are also increasing. For instance, the government of Delhi has applied a rule of odd even to control the pollution. Additionally, using bicycles rather than cars are more efficient for environment as well as for individual's health. Cycling in the best exercise anyone can do to improve his health. Furthermore, it will reduced the amount of pollution created by cars while the issue of traffic will be solved too. However, long journeys can not be done on bicycles. They are eco-friendly as well as required low maintenance therefore it is affordable by everyone. In addition, it can be observed that the city with great number of bicycle users has improved quality of air. Even doctors advised to ride bicycles daily to improve the health issues such as hypertension and diabetes. To conclude, both cars as well as bicycles are essential mode of transportation and they have their own benefits. Although, due to increase pollution issues, bicycles should be used more whereas cars should be used occasionally.
Nowadays, with increasing population the ways of transportation are raising too. Owing to this, it affects the environment by spreading
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pollution
.
Moreover
,
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many
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think
that the best way to travel is by
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car
whereas other believe that
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use
of
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bicyles
is great. This essay elucidated both views in trailed paragraphs along with the opinion at the
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end
.

To embank with,
generally
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cars
are being
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used
as the major mean of transportation.
However
,
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use
of
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cars
has several
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duawbacks
.
Firstly
, it
highly
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affect
the environment by creating air and noise
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pollution
.
Moreover
, traffic
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issues
can
be observed
with rising number of
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car
users. Owing to this, death in road mishaps are
also
increasing.
For instance
, the
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government
of Delhi has applied a
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rule
of odd even to control the pollution.

Additionally
, using
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bicycles
rather
than
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cars
are more efficient for environment
as well
as for individual's health. Cycling in the best exercise anyone can do to
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improve
his health.
Furthermore
, it will
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reduced
the amount of
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pollution
created by
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cars
while the
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issue
of traffic will
be solved
too.
However
, long journeys can not
be done
on
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bicycles
. They are eco-friendly
as well
as required low maintenance
therefore
it is affordable by everyone.
In addition
, it can
be observed
that the city with great number of
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bicycle
users has
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improved
quality of air. Even doctors advised
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to ride
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bicycles
daily to
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improve
the health
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issues
such as hypertension and diabetes.

To conclude
, both
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cars
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as well as
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bicycles
are essential mode of
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transportation and
they have their
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own
benefits. Although, due to increase
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pollution
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issues
,
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bicycles
should be
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used
more whereas
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cars
should be
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used
occasionally
.
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IELTS essay Some people say that cars are best to use in cities while others think that bicycles are better.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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