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Some people say now there is less communication between family members than in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say now there is less communication between family members than in the past. P1AB
Indeed, there is hardly any interaction between families, as it was in the past. Some opine true to that fact while there are few who still spends a leisure time with their families occasionally. I agree with the former opinion as generation gap and working life of family members affecting to great extent. The foremost reason for a decrease in interaction between families is the generation gap. Although Parents have an experience about life and their thought process depends upon their struggle to any perspective which some made misunderstanding to their kids as they have their own opinion. The different views about struggles in life or on any matter tend to make parents and children busy on their own. The busy working life is another cause of minimal communication in the family members. Like, the schedule life of parents in respect to their jobs and kids busy in their own choirs left no space for a family get-together on weekdays. This all leads to an introverted environment in the house that affects the families. Other than this, a congested family is another part of less interaction of families which creates a lonely atmosphere in the home. To summarize, I agreed to view that families have less communication present days than in the past.
Indeed
, there is hardly any interaction between
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families
, as it was in the past.
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Some
opine true to that fact while there are few who
still
spends a leisure time with their
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families
occasionally
. I
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agree
with the former opinion as generation gap and working
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life
of
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family
members affecting to great extent.

The foremost reason for a decrease in interaction between
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
is the generation gap. Although Parents have an experience about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
and their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
process depends upon their struggle to any perspective which
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
made misunderstanding to their kids as they have their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
opinion. The
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
views about struggles in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
or on any matter tend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
parents and children busy on their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
.

The busy working
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
is another cause of minimal communication in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
members. Like, the schedule
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
of parents in respect to their jobs and kids busy in their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
choirs
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
no space for a
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family
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
-together on weekdays. This all leads to an introverted environment in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
that affects the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
. Other than this, a congested
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
is another part of less interaction of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
which creates a lonely atmosphere in the home.

To summarize
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
to view that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
have less communication present days than in the past.
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IELTS essay Some people say now there is less communication between family members than in the past.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
213 words
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