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Some people say now there is less communication between family member than in the past To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some state that in the recent years, there is a nopticeable lack of communication amongst the members in a family compared to the yester year To a major extent I bolster the notion(believe)my preference is explained further The foremost reason is attributed to insufficient time due to urban life style. It must be accepted that with rampant (uncontrol) urbanisation, the pace of life has gained momentum which means long hours at work or at school longer commuting times working at unsocial hours called working parents all this has lead to inability to talk or interact with one another in the family. To add fuel to these situation, the technological advancement have vorsen the communication between family member. enticing (attractive) social media as facebook, instagram, snapchat has robbed the family time as in the past where the member used to have casual conversation

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 lack of communication amongst the members in a family compared to the Possible spelling mistake found.LesteresterHestertesterjesterfester
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further


The foremost reason is attributed
 to insufficient time due to urban life style. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 that with rampant (Possible spelling mistake found.controldecontrol
uncontrol
) Possible spelling mistake. 'urbanisation' is British English.urbanization
urbanisation
, the pace of life has gained momentum which means long hours at work or at school longer commuting times working at unsocial hours called working parents all this has lead to inability to talk or interact with one another in the family.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 fuel to Did you mean "this situation" or "these situations"?this situationthese situations
these situation
, the technological advancement have Possible spelling mistake found.worsen
vorsen
 the communication between family member. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterEnticing
enticing
 (attractive) social media as Possible spelling mistake found.Facebookface book
facebook
, Possible spelling mistake found.Instagram
instagram
, Possible spelling mistake found.Snapchatsnap chat
snapchat
 has robbed the family time as in the past where the member This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to have casual Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphconversation.conversation!conversation?conversation:conversation,conversation;
conversation