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Some people say now there is less communication between family member than in the past To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some state that in the recent years, there is a nopticeable lack of communication amongst the members in a family compared to the yester year To a major extent I bolster the notion(believe)my preference is explained further The foremost reason is attributed to insufficient time due to urban life style. It must be accepted that with rampant (uncontrol) urbanisation, the pace of life has gained momentum which means long hours at work or at school longer commuting times working at unsocial hours called working parents all this has lead to inability to talk or interact with one another in the family. To add fuel to these situation, the technological advancement have vorsen the communication between family member. enticing (attractive) social media as facebook, instagram, snapchat has robbed the family time as in the past where the member used to have casual conversation
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lack of communication amongst the members in a family compared to the
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that with rampant (
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urbanisation
, the pace of life has gained momentum which means long hours at work or at school longer commuting times working at unsocial hours called working parents all this has lead to inability to talk or interact with one another in the family.

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, the technological advancement have
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the communication between family member.
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enticing
(attractive) social media as
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facebook
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instagram
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has robbed the family time as in the past where the member
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conversation

IELTS essay Some people say now there is less communication between family member than in the past

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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