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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. p2bD
The world is fighting with huge environment problems. Few section of society opine that the loss of trees and animals are the biggest problem of environment. While others are believe that there are other several important major issue of the environment. Personally, I believe that both have their own importance. When we are looking for the former view, the loss of the precious species of the plant which have no other substances. There are many plants and trees which was used for medicine and to cure particular disease. For instance, according to Ayurveda in the past various plants available to cure any difficult problems, which are lost now due to the global warming. Moreover, some rare animals are lost or some are almost at the end of survival. All animals are very important part of our life cycle. If any animal lost, it will break our geo-cycle. Consequently, all human has to face detrimental issue in the future. Basically, Environmental problem like loss of plants and animals will make hard effect on life of humankind. On the other hand, the other important problem of environment is global warming. This problem is generated by various sources of human activities like transportation, industrial waste and use of plastic. For example, the number of vehicle and industrial waste increased now a days with high frequently, it generate very dangerous effect on environment. Furthermore, Water pollution also important problem for the environment. Highly toxic chemical wastage produced by industries and export to the river or sea which is affect aqua creatures with very badly. Therefore, global warming and water pollution both are highly impact on environment. In conclusion, I firmly in support of both views that disappeared species of plants and animals have their vital role in maintained environment. While, we could not neglect other highly influence surrounding problems like global warming and water pollution.
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of society opine that the loss of trees and
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problem
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environment
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others are
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believe
that there are
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other
several
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important
major issue of the
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environment
.
Personally
, I believe that both have their
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own
importance.

When we are looking for the former view, the loss of the precious species of the
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plant
which have no
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other
substances. There are
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many
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plants
and trees which was
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used
for medicine and to cure particular disease.
For instance
, according to Ayurveda in the past various
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plants
available to cure any difficult
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problems
, which
are lost
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now
due to the
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global
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warming
.
Moreover
,
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some
rare
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animals
are lost
or
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some
are almost at the
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end
of survival. All
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animals
are
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important
part of our life cycle. If any
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animal
lost, it will break our
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geo-cycle
.
Consequently
, all human
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has to
face detrimental issue in the future.
Basically
, Environmental
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problem
like loss of
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plants
and
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animals
will
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make
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hard
effect on life of humankind.

On the
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other
hand, the
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other
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important
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problem
of
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environment
is
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global
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warming
. This
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problem
is generated
by various sources of human activities like transportation, industrial waste and
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use
of plastic.
For example
, the number of vehicle and industrial waste increased
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now a days
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frequently
, it
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generate
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very
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dangerous
effect on
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environment
.
Furthermore
, Water pollution
also
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important
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problem
for the
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environment
.
Highly
toxic chemical wastage produced by industries and export to the river or sea which is affect aqua creatures with
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very
badly
.
Therefore
,
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global
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warming
and water pollution both are
highly
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impact
on environment.

In conclusion
, I
firmly
in support of both views that disappeared species of
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plants
and
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animals
have their vital role in maintained
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environment
. While, we could not neglect
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other
highly
influence surrounding
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problems
like
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global
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warming
and water pollution.
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IELTS essay Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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