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some people say history is one of the most important school subject. Other people think that ,in todays world subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some people say history is one of the most important school subject. Other people think that, in todays world subjects like science and technology are more important than history. qPB5
There is split opinion regarding importance of subjects in school curriculum. Some people believe that the subject like history plays an important role in primary education however, others counter argue by saying that recent technological advancement subjects like Science and Technology have great impact on children apart from history. As such there are both merits and demerits to it although I am of opinion that in 21st century it is really important to teach subjects which has some ancient background as they play a significance role in for their future development. Convincing arguments can made that, History is essential for past, present as well as future. There is no doubt that history helps young people to understand their cultures and give them identity. Moreover, today’s young generation can grasp that how their culture and country have evolved by studying history. One can not only recognize how to learn from others mistake but also it would easy for them to implement those morals for future development. For example, in India there are many organizations that puts their efforts by arranging programs related to freedom fighters who sacrifices their lives for building future of nation. Needless to say, all these benefits stand youngsters in good stead as far as augmenting prosperity and excellence is concerned. On the contrary, history is still needed in the school syllabus while science and technology related subjects are also crucial to enhance the students for the future development, as they not only learn theoretical knowledge but also improve their practical skills from such topics. Beside it is also true that, in this era, student those are really profound in advance technology and basic sciences are popular in job market. For instance, a survey conducted by Education ministry shows that, students from science and technological background have 30% more employment than students who having History degrees.
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role in primary education
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, others counter argue by saying that recent technological advancement
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subjects
like
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and Technology have great impact on children apart from
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history
. As such there are both merits and demerits to it although I am of opinion that in 21st century it is
really
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important
to teach
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subjects
which has
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ancient background as they play a significance role in for their
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future
development.

Convincing arguments can made that,
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History
is essential for past, present
as well
as
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future
. There is no doubt that
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history
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helps
young
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people
to understand their cultures and give them identity.
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,
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today
’s young generation can grasp that how their culture and country have evolved by studying
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history
. One can not
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only
recognize how to learn from others mistake
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but
also
it would easy for them to implement those morals for
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future
development.
For example
, in India there are
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many
organizations that puts their efforts by arranging programs related to freedom fighters who
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for building
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future
of nation. Needless to say, all these benefits stand youngsters in
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good
stead as far as augmenting prosperity and excellence
is concerned
.

On the contrary
,
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history
is
still
needed in the school syllabus while
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science
and technology related
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are
also
crucial to enhance the
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students
for the
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future
development, as they not
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only
learn theoretical knowledge
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but
also
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improve
their practical
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skills
from such topics. Beside it is
also
true that, in this era,
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student
those are
really
profound in advance technology and basic
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sciences
are popular in job market.
For instance
, a survey conducted by Education ministry
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shows
that,
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students
from
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science
and technological background have 30% more employment than
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students
who having
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History
degrees.
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IELTS essay some people say history is one of the most important school subject. Other people think that, in todays world subjects like science and technology are more important than history.

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