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Some people prefer to work for large campany but other prefer to small campany reson

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In this contemporary world, people hold conflicting perceptions when it comes to the competition between the campanies. However, Some individuals claim that multinational firms are extremely more profitable as campared to the lower level enterprises. I will discuss my view point in the upcoming segments. To commence with, there are numerous reasons of working in the big campanies because firm are provided by opportunity and also work.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to work for large campany but other prefer to small campany reson

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