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Some people prefer to work for a large company what are the advantages and disadvantages of working for a large companies?

Some people prefer to work for a large company what are the advantages and disadvantages of working for a large companies? xr0y
It is argued that some people give priority to work for a big company rather than to work in a small company. Working for a large company is a great option for people who want to build their future in abroad. This essay will argue that having a chance to live in broad is the biggest advantage of this and not spending time for social life is the primary disadvantage. One the one hand many people belive that working for a large firm has many benefits. The most important is that. Most of the big corporations have offices in different countries. This situation gives opportunity to people who want to work in other countries except their own countries. Therefore, people working in different countries can acquire more salary. To give an example, one of my friends who works for one of the biggest waste management companies told me that he commenced to gain more money since he worked his company's Germany office. On the other hand, there are also negative points of view which must be considered. The main drawback is that. Working for a large firm means you are always busy about what you have to do inevitably. On account of this, you do not have time for social activities. For example, according to a result of the survey which was made by a magazine pertaining about business life, %78 of people working for big films complaine that they can not go to even gym Center to relax themself. To sum up, working for a big company has brought many benefits, there are some obvious weak points for people at the same time.
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some
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people
give priority to
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work
for a
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big
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company
rather
than to
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work
in a
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small
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company
.

Working for a large
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company
is a great option for
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people
who want to build their future in abroad.

This essay will argue that having a chance to
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live
in broad is the biggest advantage of this and not spending time for social life is the primary disadvantage.

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the one hand
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many
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belive
that
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working
for a large firm has
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many
benefits.

The most
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important
is that. Most of the
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big
corporations have offices in
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different
countries. This situation gives opportunity to
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people
who want to
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work
in other countries except their
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own
countries.

Therefore
,
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people
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working
in
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different
countries can acquire more salary.

To give an example, one of my friends who
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works
for one of the biggest waste management
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companies
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told
me that he commenced to gain more money since he worked his
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company
's Germany office.

On the other hand
, there are
also
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negative
points of view which
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must
be considered
.

The main drawback is that.
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Working
for a large firm means you are always busy about what you
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have to
do
inevitably
.

On account of this, you do not have time for social activities.

For example
, according to a result of the survey which
was made
by a magazine pertaining about business life, %78 of
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people
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working
for
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big
films
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complaine
that they can not go to even gym Center to relax
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themself
.

To sum up,
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working
for a
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big
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company
has brought
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many
benefits, there are
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some
obvious weak points for
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people
at the same time.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to work for a large company what are the advantages and disadvantages of working for a large companies?

Essay
  American English
12 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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