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Employers sometime ask people applying for for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interest, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful.others disagree

Employers sometime ask people applying for for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interest, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. others disagree wdKl
In today's world where there is an immense competition, seeking a a job itself is a big milestone of everyone life's, because of which big Corporate seek every type of information of information from the candidate, which sometime leads to the suspicious nature for the firm in mind of candidate. In a very recent survey conducted by the distinguish University XYZ on the big four firms personal information questions such as martial status, hobbies and area of interest found very relevant in judging the candidate skills and capabilities of performing the task. For e. g. if a person is having a interests in history and travelling then the statics shows he/she is most desirable seeker for the tourism industry. Although it's martial status also matter as it's require lot of travelling domestically and even international. However, there is a paradox for the above situation, where organization who took this information could be judge-mental on the deserving person, even if he/she is more qualified for the job and there are some situation where firm asked for irrelevant information like what is the candidate father occupation? , if mother is housewife/Working? , How many siblings are there in the family? . A couple of months before, when I went through the similar experience. In the application form, in personal information section, a question sound like how much is your family earning. And that's make me little un-comfortable as I feel that the question was irrelevant for that Job profile. Based on the above information and example, I feel information which only link to the candidate alone is relevant as it's help organization to explore the person, but seeking family detail's should be avoided as it's make person uncomfortable and harassed because all of us are not from the same background.
In
today
's world where there is an immense competition, seeking
a a
job itself is a
big
milestone of everyone life's,
because
of which
big
Corporate seek every type of
information
of
information
from the
candidate
, which sometime leads to the suspicious nature for the firm in mind of
candidate
. In a
very
recent survey conducted by
the distinguish
University XYZ on the
big
four firms personal
information
questions such as martial status, hobbies and area of interest found
very
relevant in judging the
candidate
skills
and capabilities of performing the task. For
e. g.
if a
person
is having
a interests
in history and travelling then the statics
shows
he/she is
most
desirable seeker for the tourism industry. Although
it's martial status
also
matter as
it's
require
lot of
travelling
domestically
and even international.
However
, there is a paradox for the above situation, where organization who took this
information
could be judge-mental on the deserving
person
, even if he/she is more qualified for the job and there are
some
situation
where firm
asked for
irrelevant
information
like what is the
candidate
father occupation?
,
if mother is housewife/Working?
,
How
many
siblings are there in the family?
.
A couple of months
before
, when I went through the similar experience. In the application form, in personal
information
section, a question sound like how much is your family earning. And that's
make
me
little
un-comfortable
as I feel that the question was irrelevant for that Job profile. Based on the above
information
and example, I feel
information
which
only
link to the
candidate
alone is relevant as
it's
help
organization to explore the
person
,
but
seeking family detail's should
be avoided
as
it's
make
person
uncomfortable and harassed
because
all of us are not from the same background.
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IELTS essay Employers sometime ask people applying for for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interest, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. others disagree

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