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some people prefer to tech specialised subject to student after the age of 15

some people prefer to tech specialised subject to student after the age of 15 GMAJj
when the topic on teaching different subject in school there are split opinion. Some school believe that teaching a particular subject after attaining the age of 15 is important while other institute believe that all the subject are equally important and all the subject should be taught during the school life. Both the aspect have their own benefit and my opinion is discussed in the ensuing paragraph.
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IELTS essay some people prefer to tech specialised subject to student after the age of 15

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  American English
1 paragraphs
67 words
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