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Some people prefer to live with a roommate. Others prefer to live alone. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two options do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer

Some people prefer to live with a roommate. Others prefer to live alone. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two options do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer 85BLB
Most people like to share a room with known or unknown people. Others prefer to enjoy their own company. In my preference, I would like to share the room with someone. This essay will discuss both the views in the forthcoming paragraphs To begin with, some people like to enjoy their own company because they do not like to share their things with anyone. They also do not want any kind of disturbance in their life or room. For instance, most of the artist enjoy their own company such as musicians, painter. Musicians spend most time rehearse and they like loneliness. On the other hand, many folks like to share a room with someone. When an individual share a room with he learns a lot from another person. Sometimes, people get a friend with whom they can share their feelings. It becomes help in preparing food, doing dishes, washing clothes, cleaning room. For instance, When I was at graduation I shared a room with a girl who was from Batala and then we share our clothes, food and so on. Then we become best friend till now. To illustrate, In a survey conducted by the UK, in which found that 69% of people in the UK prefer to share a room and their belongings with roommates. To conclude, I would like to say that both views have their own advantages. But In my point of view, sharing room has more merits such as work is divided by two and can also share experiences.
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with someone. This essay will discuss both the views in the forthcoming
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their things with anyone. They
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.
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, most of the artist enjoy their
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such as musicians, painter. Musicians spend most time rehearse and they like loneliness.

On the other hand
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folks like to
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with someone.
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with he learns a lot from another person.
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a friend with whom they can
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their feelings. It becomes
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in preparing food, doing dishes, washing clothes, cleaning
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with a girl who was from
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our clothes, food and
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on. Then we become best friend till
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. To illustrate, In a survey conducted by the UK, in which found that 69% of
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in the UK prefer to
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and their belongings with roommates.

To conclude
, I would like to say that both views have their
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advantages.
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In my point of view, sharing
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has more merits such as work
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by two and can
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experiences.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to live with a roommate. Others prefer to live alone. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two options do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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