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Some People Prefer To Live In A House While Others Feel That There Are More Advantages To Living In An Apartment

Some People Prefer To Live In A House While Others Feel That There Are More Advantages To Living In An Apartment eGKW
Many of Individual having choice to live life in house as it's spacious and open, in the other hand most of realise that live in an apartment is most luxurious and helping in home related works, In this essay will discuss merits of living in an apartment. although house is convenient as its lot of space and we can modify as per our need and choice for example add new rooms, gym, swimming pool and can use roof and maintain the bills by ourselves, however the apartment also gives the luxurious look of dream house and other responsibilities will take care by the broker or society association, which also helps in our standard of life as its add sports activities for instance gym, club swimming pool, park, rest security and under the cctv previlege can make us relax as for family members safety. its expenses all included in maintaining by others which will be helpful for us to give fabulous life to family whereas in house for add all these facilities will take extra cost and time and can't provide the activities in limited income. In conclusion, Apartment are much better than house as it's give luxurious life with help of other major responsibilities handled by society which is essential required in fast-growing citylife, houses are expensive and it's tough to maintaining and in developing countries, with limited income can allow to prefer in apartment with included the facilities with help of society of appartment who can provide the aid twenty four into seven
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IELTS essay Some People Prefer To Live In A House While Others Feel That There Are More Advantages To Living In An Apartment

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
253 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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