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Some people prefer to live in a big city. Others think it is better to live in a small town. Discuss both views.

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Nowadays, most people prefer live in the big city. First of all, one of the important issues in the big city is medical services. In the big town, there are numerous hospitals and clinics also the presence of doctors who specialize in various fields is one of the best advantages of the big city. While in the small town there are fewer doctors. Secondly, shopping malls have always been a place to meet the needs of the people. Nevertheless, equipped shopping malls have been replaced by small local shops also some of the major centers have amusement parks and amenities that create better conditions for people. However, these centers are still being developed to make trading conditions easier.

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