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n many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

n many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. LWX1
n many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree? Smoking has been banned in public places like parks, hospitals and restaurants in many nations, and it is a law that many people support. This essay also agrees with this initiative because it reduces the harmful effects of passive smoking and also encourages smokers to quit. The primary reason why making it illegal to smoke in public makes sense is that it prevents people from developing diseases related to second-hand smoke. Passive smoking is something that non-smokers cannot avoid in the presence of a smoker, and it is just as dangerous to people’s health as smoking. A ban in public places limits this type of exposure. For example, after Ireland decided to ban smoking in all indoor workplaces, there was a significant decline in lung cancer and other lethal diseases among restaurant and pub workers, leading many other countries to adopt similar measures. The second main reason why this ban is warranted is that it helps those addicted to cigarettes quit their habit. A law prohibiting smoking in public areas would force smokers to leave the company of everyone else if they want to have a cigarette. Most people dislike feeling ostracised, and this would provide excellent motivation to quit. For instance, social pressure brought about by smoking bans is often cited by ex-smokers as one of the reasons they gave up the habit. In conclusion, this essay believes that making it against the law to smoke in public should be encouraged because it prevents innocent people from developing serious health conditions caused by passive smoking and reduces the number of smokers.
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places like parks, hospitals and restaurants in
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nations, and it is a law that
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reduces
the harmful effects of passive
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smoking
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quit.

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something that non-smokers cannot avoid in the presence of a smoker, and it is
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health as
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. A
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ban
in
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places limits this type of exposure.

For example
, after Ireland decided to
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ban
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smoking
in all indoor workplaces, there was a

significant decline in lung cancer and other lethal diseases among restaurant and pub

workers, leading
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many
other countries to adopt similar measures.

The second main reason why this
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ban
is warranted
is that it
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helps
those addicted to

cigarettes quit their habit. A law prohibiting
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smoking
in
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public
areas would force smokers to

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feeling
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, and this would provide excellent motivation to quit.
For instance
, social

pressure brought about by
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smoking
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bans
is
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cited by ex-smokers as one of the reasons

they gave up the habit.

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, this essay believes that making it against the law to smoke in
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public
should
be encouraged
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innocent
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people
from developing serious health conditions

caused by passive
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reduces
the number of smokers.
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IELTS essay n many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified.

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
286 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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