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Some people prefer to buy local products while others international products. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people prefer to buy local products while others international products. XMG8
Purchasing habits are influenced by many factors ranging from money to durability. Going locally means customers can save money and, international consumer goods may be durable and of high standard. I, however, would go with global brands due the promised quality. This essay will discuss both perspectives and my viewpoint in detail. Locally produced products are typically cost-effective because of no international tariffs and raw materials readily available within the country at low price. So, that is a justified reason some buyers prefer buying native products. In this way they can live comfortably in this inflation time by having some savings. For example, an Indian manufactured perfume Fogg costs around ten to fifteen dollars while, Calvin Klein an American brand costs 80 to 100 dollars therefore Indian brand make dramatic sales than the competitor. International brands may be good at promising the longevity of their items because to remain in the global market a business should have high standard products. Customers in this modern world are brand conscious that is why they get attracted to global brands which are long lasting and never demand added maintenance charges if happens then the customer service proves to be satisfactory. Addidas for instance is a well-known name in the field of footwears and they sell premium quality sports shoes. Cricket players are often seen wearing Addidas shoes. In my preference about shopping, I would rather buy a global brand because of their performance and quality. These products never compromise with standard of quality. I would rather buy international protein which has gone through many tests than Himalay's. To conclude, while shopping people consider quality and their pocket. Money saving aim can be achieved with local brands and global products ensure quality and stability.
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are influenced
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many
factors ranging from money to durability. Going
locally
means customers can save money and, international consumer
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goods
may be durable and of high standard. I,
however
, would
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go with
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global
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brands
due the promised
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quality
. This essay will discuss both perspectives and my viewpoint in detail.

Locally
produced
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products
are
typically
cost-effective
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because
of no international tariffs and raw materials
readily
available within the country at low price.
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So
,
that is
a justified reason
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some
buyers prefer buying native
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products
. In this way they can
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live
comfortably
in this inflation time by having
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some
savings.
For example
, an Indian manufactured perfume
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Fogg
costs around ten to fifteen dollars while, Calvin Klein an American
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brand
costs 80 to 100 dollars
therefore
Indian
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brand
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make
dramatic
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sales
than the competitor.

International
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brands
may be
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good
at promising the longevity of their items
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because
to remain in the
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global
market a business should have high standard
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products
. Customers in this modern world are
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brand
conscious
that is
why they
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get
attracted to
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global
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brands
which are
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long lasting
and never demand
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added
maintenance charges if happens then the customer service proves to be satisfactory.
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Addidas
for instance
is a well-known name in the field of
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footwears and
they sell premium
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quality
sports shoes. Cricket players are
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often
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seen
wearing
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Addidas
shoes.

In my preference about shopping, I would
rather
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buy
a
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global
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brand
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because
of their

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performance
and
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quality
. These
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products
never compromise with standard of
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quality
. I would
rather
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buy
international protein which has gone through
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many
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tests
than
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Himalay
's.

To conclude
, while shopping
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people
consider
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quality
and their pocket. Money saving aim can
be achieved
with local
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brands
and
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global
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products
ensure
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quality
and stability.
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to buy local products while others international products.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
290 words
6.0
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