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Some people prefer to be nocturnal during exam days and go through the entire syllabus in the last few days, whereas others have regular habits, studying a little every day. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both studying patterns and choose which one is a better way of action according to you. v.2

Some people prefer to be nocturnal during exam days and go through the entire syllabus in the last few days, whereas others have regular habits, studying a little every day. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both studying patterns and choose which one is a better way of action according to you. v. 2
It is often said that economic growth is necessary to eradicate poverty and hunger. On the other hand, some people think that the environment is being destructed by the growth of our economy and the necessary steps should be taken. In particular, there are several measures need to be taken into consideration to protect our environment. This essay will delve into both the views with relevant examples. Firstly, environmental safety is paramount to stop economic growth. To continue with, harmful chemicals are affecting our environment at a huge extent. Moreover, a plethora of factories emitting harmful gases which really degenerating the atmosphere and leads to pollution. To exemplify, the demand for electricity will rise and factories will choose to use fossil fuels to produce electricity which again leads to damage our environment. However, safety measures need to be considered to get the pristine ecosystem. Furthermore, it has been found since our independence that rich people are getting richer, in contrast, poor people are getting poor. So, no evidence supports that economic growth will develop and remove poverty and hunger. In addition to that, due to the advancement of technology, the rate of unskilled employment is going down. According to empirical research, 20% of the jobs are being replaced by artificial robots or machines every year, which is actually food for thought. Nevertheless, the utilization of labour is needed in spite of choosing machines. To recapitulate, it is more important and also a wise step to protect our environment over economic growth.
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is necessary to eradicate poverty and hunger.
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is
being destructed
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of our economy and the necessary steps should
be taken
.
In particular
, there are several measures need to
be taken
into consideration to protect our
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environment
. This essay will delve into both the views with relevant examples.

Firstly
, environmental safety is paramount to
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stop
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economic
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growth
. To continue with, harmful chemicals are affecting our
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environment
at a huge extent.
Moreover
, a plethora of factories emitting harmful gases which
really
degenerating the atmosphere and leads to pollution. To exemplify, the demand for electricity will rise and factories will choose to
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use
fossil fuels to produce electricity which again leads to damage our
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environment
.
However
, safety measures need to
be considered
to
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get
the pristine ecosystem.

Furthermore
, it has
been found
since our independence that rich
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people
are getting richer,
in contrast
, poor
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people
are getting poor.
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, no evidence supports that
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economic
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growth
will develop and remove poverty and hunger.
In addition
to that, due to the advancement of technology, the rate of unskilled employment is going down. According to empirical research, 20% of the jobs are
being replaced
by artificial robots or machines every year, which is actually food for
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thought
.
Nevertheless
, the utilization of
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labour
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in spite of
choosing machines.

To recapitulate, it is more
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important
and
also
a wise step to protect our
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environment
over
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economic
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growth
.
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14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to be nocturnal during exam days and go through the entire syllabus in the last few days, whereas others have regular habits, studying a little every day. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both studying patterns and choose which one is a better way of action according to you. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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