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Some people prefer living in a village while others prefer to live in a city, which one do you agree

Some people prefer living in a village while others prefer to live in a city, which one do you agree yG0JD

Humans, all the time need to find places to settle down, some people prefer to live in a village while others favor living in a city. I believe that living in a city is far better than living in a village. To start with, the cities usually have better schools, universities, and hospitals than villages which have not only good teachers, healthcare professionals but also good facilities and equipment. For instance, advanced investigations devices such as computed tomography scans. In addition, it is obvious that the best roads for transportations are firstly introduced in the cities, and the modern transportations much better in the cities than in the villages. For example, there are plenty of trains, buses, and cars available in the cities. Furthermore, cities offer better security to their residents such as the mobile police on the roads, special forces, community police stations. But in the villages, the figure of security force individuals is too low compared to the cities. To conclude, I prefer to live in the city for its advanced schools, universities, hospital, best transportations options, and safety.

Humans, all the time need to find places to settle down, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
village
 while others favor living in a city. I believe that living in a city is far You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuperiorimprovedexceptional
better
 than living in a village.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
usually
 have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuperiorimprovedexceptional
better
 schools, universities, and hospitals than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
villages
 which have not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 teachers, healthcare professionals This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 facilities and equipment. For instance
, advanced investigations devices such as computed tomography scans.

In addition
, it is obvious that the best roads for transportations are firstly
 introduced in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
, and the modern transportations much You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuperiorimprovedexceptional
better
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 than in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
villages
. For example
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of trains, buses, and cars available in the cities.

Furthermore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 offer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuperiorimprovedexceptional
better
 security to their residents such as the mobile police on the roads, special forces, community police stations. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsuburbcenter
villages
, the figure of security force individuals is too low compared to the cities.

To conclude
, I prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the city for its advanced schools, universities, hospitalA determiner is probably missing here: ", the best"., the best
, best
 transportations options, and safety. 