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Some people like using work by hand. Others prefer using machines.

Some people like using work by hand. Others prefer using machines. 7ap2A
In modern era, there are myriad things in the world which have been produced either using by help of machines or hand manual. Some individuals believe to work by hand manualing and others prefer using machineries. So, I will discuss both the reasons with an exmple in my further paragraphs. To begin with, some individuals believe that the manual work is very satisfying work and they get self-confidence. Moreover, they feel they have special skill and ability to do something difference. Second, they also believe that automatics system may be harmful for some works. For instance, everyday the kichen foods make by hand manual with full check the taste of every ingradiene of required spices. Third, people have own experience that there have been done any work by using hand which always to be proud own self. On the flip side, other humans prefer that machine gives pure out put quality works. This is the reason, machine is made by fully design with auto system which give to us hundred percentage works. Furthermore, they also excepted that any kinds of work can be possible by using machineries with saving time, energy and cost. Also, in the faster world, the competition level have become amongst producers of every products in the market, and so it can be possible only using advance and fully automated machine which can complete the target of products within a time periods. To sum-up, every individuals have option to select the best choice to do work by help of using manual or machine. They have different purpose such as some want to get self-satisfaction and proud feel when doing manual work and others have to complete their effective products within a time period which can be possible only through machine.
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been produced
either using by
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machines
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manual.
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Some
individuals believe to
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work
by
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hand
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manualing
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prefer using
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machineries
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some
individuals believe that the manual
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work
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very
satisfying
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work and
they
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get
self-confidence.
Moreover
, they feel they have special
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skill
and ability to do something difference. Second, they
also
believe that
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automatics
system may be harmful for
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some
works.
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,
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the
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kichen
foods
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make
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hand
manual with full
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check
the taste of every
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ingradiene
of required spices. Third,
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people
have
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own
experience that there have
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any
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work
by using
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hand
which

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always
to be proud
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own
self.

On the flip side, other humans prefer that
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machine
gives pure out put quality works. This is the reason,
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machine
is made
by
fully
design with auto system which give to us
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hundred
percentage works.
Furthermore
, they
also
excepted that any kinds of
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work
can be possible by using
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machineries
with saving time, energy and cost.
Also
, in the faster world, the competition level have become amongst producers of every
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products
in the market, and
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so
it can be possible
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only
using advance and
fully
automated
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machine
which can complete the target of products within a time periods.

To sum-up, every
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individuals
have option to select the best choice to do
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work
by
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help
of using manual or
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machine
. They have
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different
purpose such as
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some
want to
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get
self-satisfaction and proud feel when doing manual
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work
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and others
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have to
complete their effective products within a time period which can be possible
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only
through
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machine
.
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IELTS essay Some people like using work by hand. Others prefer using machines.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
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