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Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which one do you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice (advantages, disadvantages of both variants).

Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which one do you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice (advantages, disadvantages of both variants). yXxRM
Currently, we have a lot of opportunities to travel and it's an important decision: to find a partner or to go on a trip alone. I think it really depends on your goals and all variants have both advantages and disadvantages. For example, when a person has holidays and wants to have fun, the best decision will be to invite somebody due to sharing expenses and beautiful moments. Of course, they should be pleasant people or you will have a risk of spoil vacation. Sometimes it's tough when you and your companion have different wishes and plans on a trip. However, it seems to be more safe variant. I feel calmer when I go to unknown countries with my family or friends. On the other side, if your goal is to know something new about yourself or find some important answers, maybe it will be better to be alone on your trip. I haven't traveled alone a lot but, in my opinion, it's crucial for our eye-opening and reflection. Although there are also some cons. As was mentioned above it's less safe than traveling with a companion. Moreover, no one will have the same memories. And in addition, there is one more disadvantage in this case - a lack of stunning photos for your social media (only selfies). So, it's really difficult to choose. All options are great and bad at the same time. As for me, I have a dream of a big trip around the world and I think that I have a special mood so I would rather go alone.
Currently
, we have
a lot of
opportunities to travel and
it's
an
important
decision: to find a partner or to go on a
trip
alone
. I
think
it
really
depends on your goals and all variants have both advantages and disadvantages.

For example
, when a person has holidays and wants to have fun, the best decision will be to invite somebody due to sharing expenses and
beautiful
moments.
Of course
, they should be pleasant
people
or you will have a
risk
of spoil vacation.
Sometimes
it's
tough when you and your companion have
different
wishes and plans on a
trip
.
However
, it seems to be more safe variant. I feel calmer when I go to unknown countries with my family or friends.

On the other side, if your goal is to know something new about yourself or find
some
important
answers, maybe it will be better to be
alone
on your
trip
. I haven't traveled
alone
a lot
but
, in my opinion,
it's
crucial for our eye-opening and reflection.
Although
there are
also
some
cons. As
was mentioned
above
it's
less safe than traveling with a companion.
Moreover
, no one will have the same memories. And
in addition
, there is one more disadvantage
in this case
-
a lack of stunning photos for your social media (
only
selfies).

So
,
it's
really
difficult to choose. All options are great and
bad
at the same time. As for me, I have a dream of a
big
trip
around the world and I
think
that I have a special mood
so
I would
rather
go
alone
.
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IELTS essay Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which one do you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice (advantages, disadvantages of both variants).

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