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Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer

Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer 9Mrn
Nowadays, most people prefer to travel alone with a group however, I do not agree with this view and I think traveling with companion is finest Firstly, group traveling is always cheaper than traveling alone because travel expenses are shared by the group. For exaple: Research wich was held in 2019, proves that, travel groups travel cheaper than individual people who prefer to travel alone Secondly, during group traveling person can share their fellings and an impressions with teammates. Part of society belive, travel alone is comfortable and safety however i think traveling with team is more safety than alone because if person needs help, group members will take care to help him. In conclution, i agre with this, solo traveling has advantages but i prefer to travel with the team, becaus it is much safer, cheap and more convenient
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IELTS essay Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer

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