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3 Products export comparison for three years

This bar char report focuses on international tourism, Dairy products and meat products exports comparison in southlands for 2000 and 2020 measured in billions of pounds. It also illustrates about its upcoming predictions for 2025. Meat products export is low compared dairy products and international tourism in all the years. Dairy products and international tourism showed its peak in 2020 and 2025 respectively. International tourism increased by minimal margin from 8 billion to closed to 9 billion from 2000 to 2020 and it is set to reach its production around 10 billion in 2025. Dairy Products export as witnessed an outstanding growth from 2000 to 2020 making the sales from 7 billion to 10 billion. It is expected to decline its value by midget in 2025 to 9. 5 billion sales. Meat products are on constant down trend on all these years beginning its sales from 6 billion in 2000 getting descending close to 5. 5bilion in 2020 and further shrink to 5 billion in 2025.
This bar char report focuses on international
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tourism
,
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Dairy
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products
and meat
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products
exports comparison in
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southlands
for 2000 and 2020 measured in
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billions
of pounds. It
also
illustrates about its upcoming predictions for 2025.

Meat
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products
export is low compared
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dairy
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products
and international
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tourism
in all the years.
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Dairy
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products
and international
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tourism
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showed
its peak in 2020 and 2025
respectively
.

International
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tourism
increased by minimal margin from 8
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billion
to closed to 9
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billion
from 2000 to
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2020 and
it
is set
to reach its production around 10
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billion
in 2025.
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Dairy
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Products
export as witnessed an outstanding growth from 2000 to 2020 making the sales from 7
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billion
to 10
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billion
. It is
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expected
to decline its value by midget in 2025 to 9. 5
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billion
sales. Meat
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products
are on constant
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down trend
on all these years beginning its sales from 6
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billion
in 2000 getting descending close to 5. 5bilion in 2020 and
further
shrink to 5
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billion
in 2025.
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IELTS essay 3 Products export comparison for three years

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
166 words
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