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Some people feel that the effects of advertising are positive for the individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people feel that the effects of advertising are positive for the individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. YjjK
Advertisements are a fruitful facet for the people and for commercial value. However, some portion of the society are not in its favour. I will substantiate positive and negative impacts as well regarding advertising and present my view. In recent days, promotional tactics are an indispensable part of any business whether it is low - scale or high - scale. Hence, strategies are made to attract consumers in huge numbers. This can only be done by the means of show - bills which are published on several platforms such as on our television sets, on radios ( in older days) and all social media applications.
Advertisements are a fruitful facet for the
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people
and for commercial value.
However
,
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some
portion of the society are not in its
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favour
. I will substantiate
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positive
and
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negative
impacts
as well
regarding advertising and present my view. In recent days, promotional tactics are an indispensable part of any business whether it is low
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-
scale or high
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scale.
Hence
, strategies
are made
to attract consumers in huge numbers. This can
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only
be done
by the means of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
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-
bills which
are published
on several platforms such as on our television sets, on radios
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(
in older days) and all social media applications.

IELTS essay Some people feel that the effects of advertising are positive for the individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative.

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