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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. 9LlYW
While some people think that it is the responsibility of producers and suppliers to reduce product packaging, others feel that the responsibility lies with consumers. This essay will analyse both sides of the argument. On one hand, I believe that companies do have a significant responsibility to limit the amount of packaging that they package their products in. One reason for this is that many consumers have very little awareness about the negative impacts that the excessive amounts of product packaging are having on the environment; therefore, manufacturers and supermarkets need to minimise the amount of plastic packaging that is used to store and sell their products, or preferably use only biodegradable, recyclable, or environmentally friendly materials. In addition, many people cannot afford to be selective about which products they buy, which is a further reason why all companies need to be more responsible. On the other hand, individuals also have a responsibility to protect the environment from further destruction and pollution by limiting their consumption of products that are packaged in non-biodegradable materials. By boycotting certain products from companies who are not being environmentally responsible, consumers can put pressure on these companies to change their attitude towards the materials that they use to package their products. As a result, companies will be forced to act more environmentally responsible by changing and reducing product packaging. Consumers have the power to bring about change, but must act together in order for it to happen. In conclusion, companies and individuals both need to take responsibility for the amount of packaging that is used to package goods. The government also needs to play a significant role in this issue by creating and enforcing laws that companies must adhere to with regards to plastic packaging, and by educating individuals about the environmental destruction and pollution caused by packaging waste.
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that it is the
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responsibility
of producers and suppliers to
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reduce
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product
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, others feel that the
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responsibility
lies with
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consumers
. This essay will
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both sides of the argument.

On one hand, I believe that
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companies
do have a significant
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responsibility
to limit the
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amount
of
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packaging
that they package their
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products
in. One reason for this is that
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many
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consumers
have
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very
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little
awareness about the
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negative
impacts that the excessive
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amounts
of
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product
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packaging
are having on the environment;
therefore
, manufacturers and supermarkets
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need
to
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minimise
the
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amount
of plastic
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packaging
that is
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used
to store and sell their
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products
, or
preferably
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use
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only
biodegradable, recyclable, or
environmentally
friendly materials.
In addition
,
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many
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people
cannot afford to be selective about which
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products
they
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buy
, which is a
further
reason why all
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companies
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need
to be more responsible.

On the other hand
, individuals
also
have a
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responsibility
to protect the environment from
further
destruction and pollution by limiting their consumption of
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products
that
are packaged
in non-biodegradable materials. By boycotting certain
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products
from
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companies
who are not being
environmentally
responsible,
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consumers
can put pressure on these
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companies
to
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change
their attitude towards the materials that they
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use to
package their
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products
.
As a result
,
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companies
will
be forced
to act more
environmentally
responsible by changing and reducing
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product
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packaging
.
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Consumers
have the power to bring about
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change
,
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must
act together in order for it to happen.

In conclusion
,
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companies
and individuals both
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need
to take
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responsibility
for the
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amount
of
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packaging
that is
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used
to package
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goods
. The
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government
also
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needs
to play a significant role in this issue by creating and enforcing laws that
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companies
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must
adhere to
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with regards to
plastic
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packaging
, and by educating individuals about the environmental destruction and pollution caused by
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packaging
waste.
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IELTS essay Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging.

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