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Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem. Yoyd
To reduce the increased temperature due to human's activities on earth must be halt with the contribution of the authorities. Although this notion is favoured by some part of the society, others have a counter-argument that to tackle this serious issue people have to take some actions on their own. This essay concurs that both arguments are equally important. The upcoming paragraphs will discuss the importance of each category to diminish this major issue to support my opinion. To begin with, the government not only helps to decrease the level of global warming by implementing strict law but also can aware of the population to minimize this problem. To elaborate further, the uses of fossil fuels by the industries at large scale and exhaust fumes produce from huge uses of private means of transportation by the people could be halt or reduced when there will be solid law employed by the authority against overuse of these resources. For instance, a survey conducted recently has revealed that 40% of pollution can be minimized globally if society follows the issued law and order with responsibility. Moreover, the government can arrange awareness program in urban and rural areas to save the environment by growing more trees. As a result, soil erosion and changes in climate can be stopped for the long-term. Nevertheless, this is an individual's responsibility as well to maintain the earth's climate. The first and foremost contribution by a human to change their habits toward lifestyle. They must travel in public transportation rather than their own vehicles. This will reduce the level of exhaust fumes which are harmful to our atmosphere. To illustrate, people can use public transportation for commuting rather than their own vehicles. Secondly, more biodegradable products must be utilized around the world to reduce the global warming problem. Additionally, people could prefer those things which could be recycled and reused in future for a certain time period. Hence, the environmentally friendly demeanour assist to reduce the temperature of the earth's surface. To conclude, this essay supports the idea that the authorities and communities have to work simultaneously to solve this major issue. Government and inhabitant both should be responsible at different stages to dealt the global warming and get back to nature
To
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reduce
the increased temperature due to
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human's activities
on earth
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must
be halt with the contribution of the authorities. Although this notion is
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favoured
by
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some
part of the society, others have a counter-argument that to tackle this serious issue
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people
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have to
take
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some
actions on their
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own
. This essay concurs that both arguments are
equally
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important
. The upcoming paragraphs will discuss the importance of each category to diminish this major issue to support my opinion.

To
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begin
with, the
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government
not
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only
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helps
to decrease the level of global warming by implementing strict law
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but
also
can aware of the population to minimize this problem. To elaborate
further
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
of fossil fuels by the industries at large scale and exhaust fumes produce from huge
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
of private means of transportation by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
could be halt or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
when there will be solid law employed by the authority against overuse of these resources.
For instance
, a survey conducted recently has revealed that 40% of pollution can
be minimized
globally if society follows the issued law and order with responsibility.
Moreover
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
can arrange awareness program in urban and rural areas to save the environment by growing more trees.
As a result
, soil erosion and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in climate can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stopped
for the long-term.

Nevertheless
, this is an individual's responsibility
as well
to maintain the earth's climate. The
first
and foremost contribution by a human to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
their habits toward lifestyle. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
travel in public transportation
rather
than their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
vehicles. This will
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reduce
the level of exhaust fumes which are harmful to our atmosphere. To illustrate,
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people
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
public transportation for commuting
rather
than their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
vehicles.
Secondly
, more biodegradable products
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be utilized
around the world to
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reduce
the global warming problem.
Additionally
,
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people
could prefer those things which could
be recycled
and reused in future for a certain time period.
Hence
, the
environmentally
friendly
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demeanour
assist to
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reduce
the temperature of the earth's surface.

To conclude
, this essay supports the
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idea
that the authorities and communities
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have to
work
simultaneously
to solve this major issue.
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Government
and inhabitant both should be responsible at
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different
stages
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to dealt
the global warming and
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get
back to
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nature
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IELTS essay Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
373 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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