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Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product or service. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product or service. 65NB
Budget is an important factor to buy any goods or services however getting something in reasonable price is always an immense satisfation but multiple time person has to compromise with the quality. I am not in a favoure of buying anything just on the basis of price factor alone, quality should also be considered before choosing anything. Firstly, If seller is selling something good in lesser price by adding heavy discount then they surley reduce the cost of manufactor which automatically degrade the product quality but product is becoming attractive to the buyer. In this buyer should crosscheck the quality also. For example, If you go for online shopping, most of the people add prize filter to make shopping easier and considerablly fast. After checking reviews which is also an important factor, people came to know that mentioed product is not good for longer use also it is not achieving the buyers expectation. Secondly, If you buy any service for which you do not have to spend much, then definately you are not receiving all the required benefits that you suppose to receive by default. Similar service from different companies has different price that is the reason there offering is also not the same. For example, If you are selecting any health insurance policy which is considerably less in cost compare to other similar policies then service provide by this policy should be having immense difference. They might be not giving you cover for some dangeraous diseases. On conclude, before buying any goods or services quality should be prioritise over cost as less cost majorly inversally proportional to the quality. There is no point of purchasing anything if it does not last long enough.
Budget is an
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important
factor to
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buy
any
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goods
or
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services
however
getting something in reasonable
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price
is always an immense
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satisfation
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but
multiple time person
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has to
compromise with the
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quality
. I am not in a
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favoure
of buying anything
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just
on the basis of
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price
factor alone,
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quality
should
also
be considered
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before
choosing anything.

Firstly
, If seller is selling something
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good
in lesser
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price
by adding heavy discount then they
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surley
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reduce
the
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cost
of
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manufactor
which
automatically
degrade the product
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quality
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but
product is becoming attractive to the buyer. In this buyer should crosscheck the
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quality
also
.
For example
, If you go for online shopping, most of the
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people
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add
prize filter to
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make
shopping easier and
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considerablly
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fast
. After checking reviews which is
also
an
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important
factor,
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people
came to know that
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mentioed
product is not
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good
for longer
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use
also
it is not achieving the
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buyers
expectation.

Secondly
, If you
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buy
any
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service
for which you do not
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have to
spend much, then
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definately
you are not receiving all the required benefits that you suppose to receive by default. Similar
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service
from
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different
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companies
has
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different
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price
that is
the reason there offering is
also
not the same.
For example
, If you are selecting any health insurance policy which is
considerably
less in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cost
compare to other similar policies then
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service
provide by this policy should be having immense difference. They might be not giving you cover for
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some
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dangeraous
diseases.

On conclude,
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before
buying any
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goods
or
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services
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quality
should be
Consider using the past participle "prioritised"?
prioritise
over
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cost
as less
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cost
majorly
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inversally
proportional to the
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quality
. There is no point of purchasing anything if it does not last long
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enough
.
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IELTS essay Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product or service.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
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