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Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product (such as cell phone) or service (e. g medical treatment). K2W3
It is always advisable to be a prudent spender. Buying something at a lower price satisfies us seemingly in getting the best deal. Some people say that the price of a product such as a cell phone or service such as medical treatment is the most important thing to consider while shopping. However, I do not agree with this viewpoint. One of the major risks of purchasing a product or service at a cheaper price is the compromise on its quality. In general, most of the expensive commodities and services are of high quality while low priced products often fail to meet the standards. For example, clothes, accessories, and shoes from well-known brands such as Nike and Reebok seem to be costlier but they are much more durable. Smartphones from brands such as iPhone or Samsung may be too pricey; however, the user is very less likely to experience any technical snag or dissatisfaction. Secondly, by opting for a cheap deal, one may miss out an opportunity to feel and know the benefits of high-quality products or services. A consumer may just spend more time in adjusting to the economical service. For instance, patients suffering from a persistent medical illness such as Asthma or Abdominal pains may never get proper treatment if they hesitate to visit private hospitals. Lastly, I feel that the reluctance to spend money on important requirements may cost more in the long run. For example, someone who hesitates to spend / shell out extra money for standard health check-up regularly may not realize the latent degradation of important body organs. If the condition exacerbates in case of a heart or kidney failure, one has to spend a fortune to get good treatment. The same can be the case with discounted mobile phones. One may end up paying extra for repairing the touch screen or battery after some time. In conclusion, there is no harm in being cost conscious. However, if we compromise on quality by buying cheap products or services we may end up spending more in the long term. Hence, it is important to consider quality as well as price while making a purchase.
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price
satisfies us
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say that the
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of a
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product
such as a cell phone or
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service
such as medical treatment is the most
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important
thing to consider while shopping.
However
, I do not
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agree
with this viewpoint.

One of the major
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risks
of purchasing a
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product
or
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service
at a cheaper
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price
is the compromise on its
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quality
.
In general
, most of the expensive commodities and
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services
are of high
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quality
while low priced
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products
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often
fail to
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meet
the standards.
For example
, clothes, accessories, and shoes from well-known brands such as Nike and Reebok seem to be costlier
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but
they are much more durable. Smartphones from brands such as iPhone or Samsung may be too pricey;
however
, the user is
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very
less likely to experience any technical snag or dissatisfaction.

Secondly
, by opting for a
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cheap
deal, one may miss out an opportunity to feel and know the benefits of high-quality
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products
or
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services
. A consumer may
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just
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spend
more time in adjusting to the economical
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service
.
For instance
, patients suffering from a persistent medical illness such as Asthma or Abdominal pains may never
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get
proper treatment if they hesitate to visit private hospitals.

Lastly
, I feel that the reluctance to
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spend
money on
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important
requirements may cost more in the long run.
For example
, someone who hesitates to
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spend
/ shell out extra money for standard health
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check
-up
regularly
may not realize the latent degradation of
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important
body organs. If the condition exacerbates in case of a heart or kidney failure, one
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has to
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spend
a fortune to
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get
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good
treatment. The same can be the case with discounted mobile phones. One may
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end
up paying extra for repairing the touch screen or battery after
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some
time.

In conclusion
, there is no harm in
being cost
conscious.
However
, if we compromise on
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quality
by buying
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cheap
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products
or
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services
we may
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end
up spending more in the long term.
Hence
, it is
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important
to consider
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quality
as well
as
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price
while making a
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purchase
.
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IELTS essay Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying a product (such as cell phone) or service (e. g medical treatment).

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
359 words
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