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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for the government to make it a legal requirement. To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for the government to make it a legal requirement. qV5XD
Household waste, also known as post-consumer waste, is one of the most hazadeous wastage which contributes majorly towards environmental degradation. To control the grim situation, recycling the waste is the need of the hour. However, some people claim that although it is important to recycle the waste products, not enough of it is being actually done. For this, they suggest that the government should make it as a legal requirement for every household to follow. This essay will discuss why strict measurements like laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste in order to save the environment. First and foremost, wastage and pollution aren't new terms that have been coined recently. Since long we have been taught about how neccessary it is to maintain the balance of mother nature, things that spoils the environment and the importance of 3Rs - reduce, reuse and recycle. However, many of us still choose not to pay much attention towards them. Notably, most of the household items come in a plastic packaging, for instance nutrella jars, which are thrown to waste right after consumption. One simple way to recycle such jars is to use them as pen or pencil stands, or use them to store small items like rings or chains. Secondly, a section of a society thinks that they are previledged and have enough wealth to not to care about things getting wasted. Recently a data has revealed that there is an immense use of plastic bags around the world. Especially in India, where the government has although urged the masses to carry their own cloth or jute bags to the markets, people still choose to purchase and take items in the one-time use plastic bags. Later these plastics are dumped which further deteroits the environment. It is a high time that people must realise the importance of recycling the items. Therefore the government should implement the laws and make sure the citizens use one item in several ways and multiple times.
Household
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waste
,
also
known as post-consumer
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waste
, is one of the most
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hazadeous
wastage which contributes
majorly
towards environmental degradation. To control the grim situation, recycling the
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waste
is the need of the hour.
However
,
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some
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people
claim that although it is
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important
to
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recycle
the
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waste
products, not
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enough
of it is being actually done. For this, they suggest that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should
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make
it as a legal requirement for every household to follow. This essay will discuss why strict measurements like laws
are needed
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
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recycle
more of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
in order to save the environment.

First
and foremost, wastage and pollution aren't new terms that have
been coined
recently. Since
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long we
have
been taught
about how
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neccessary
it is to maintain the balance of mother nature, things that spoils the environment and the importance of 3Rs
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-
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reduce
, reuse and
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recycle
.
However
,
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many
of us
still
choose not to pay much attention towards them.

Notably
, most of the household
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items
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come
in a
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plastic
packaging,
for instance
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nutrella
jars, which
are thrown
to
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waste
right after consumption. One simple way to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycle
such jars is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
them as pen or pencil stands, or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
them to store
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small
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items
like rings or chains.

Secondly
, a section of a society
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thinks
that they are
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previledged
and have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
wealth
One 'to' seems to be obsolete.
to not to
care about things getting wasted. Recently a data has revealed that there is an immense
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
bags around the world.
Especially
in India, where the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
has although urged the masses to carry their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
cloth or jute bags to the markets,
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people
still
choose to
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purchase
and take
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items
in the one-time
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
bags. Later these
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plastics
are dumped
which
further
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deteroits
the environment.

It is a high time that
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people
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must
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realise
the importance of recycling the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
items
.
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Therefore
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should implement the laws and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure the citizens
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
one
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item
in several ways and multiple times.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for the government to make it a legal requirement.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
332 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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