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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement? 3axew

In this 21st century human beings are believing in that In present situation they got various choices to do something in their own life’s. Off course! In present time everyone can do extra things than other because of science. Firstly, from our past days these days people can do any types of work if they want to fulfils their belly. To reach in this level there’s primary role of science and government. The new types of machines or facilities which is provided by scientist and government office lunch it in market. Secondly, there are various things which are developed in nowadays as do compare as past time. There Was lack of facility, lack of education, lack go jobs and vice versa. In the other side of this opportunity here are some people which are always try to earn much more money than other from doing illegal works. And this types of facilities are not available in all over the world. Some places of countries are still facing the lack of opportunity. Some citizens have power but they only want to do things haphazard and we should learn or take these situations in correct way in our life’s. However, if every citizens have in good position. It will be better for world. In conclusion, I tend to think that every individuals must thing good for their future and follow the right path. This chances come out because of the scientific things.

In this 21st century human beings The verb 'believing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are believing
 in that In present situation they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 various choices to do something in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 life’s. Off course! In present time everyone can do extra things than other This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of science.

Firstly
, from our past days these days This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can do any types of work if they want to The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "fulfil".fulfil
fulfils
 their belly. To reach in this level there’s primary role of science and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
. The new types of machines or facilities which is provided
 by scientist and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 office lunch it in market. Secondly
, there are various things which are developed
nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: "nowadays".nowadays
in nowadays
 as do compare as Did you mean "pastime"?pastime
past time
. There Was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlossshortfallinadequacyreductiondearthpaucity
lack
 of facility, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlossshortfallinadequacyreductiondearthpaucity
lack
 of education, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlossshortfallinadequacyreductiondearthpaucity
lack
 go jobs and vice versa.

In the other side of this opportunity here are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 which are always Consider using a past participle here: "tried".tried
try
 to earn much more money than other from doing illegal works. And this types of facilities are not available in all over the world. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 places of countries are still
 facing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlossshortfallinadequacyreductiondearthpaucity
lack
 of opportunity. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 citizens have power This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 want to do things Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).haphazard, and
haphazard and
 we should learn or take these situations in correct way in our life’s. However
, if every The noun should be probably in the singular form: "citizen"?citizen
citizens
 have in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 position. It will be better for world.

In conclusion
, I tend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that every individuals This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
Did you mean the verb "think"?think
thing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for their future and follow the right path. Did you mean "these"?These
This
 chances This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 out This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the scientific things. 