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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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In this concurrent world, environment is the crucial part of the concern. Section of scociety assart that garbage are not recycled enough which make noticeable effect on nature. I believe that the government shoud bring a focus on this issue and make some law thus, people are encouraged to use a recyclable products. This essay will disscus how individual and government will take a action for this development. To begin with, as being a part of the environment we all should be aware about how we can able to reduce carbon footprint. However, as much as possible we tend to use product which are able to recycled. For instance, where we need to use carry bag, we must go for paper bag insted to plastic. Secondly, we can help to waste collect commities by saperation ot garbage in a two group. one which can be recycl or one which can not. For that we can use different dustbin in our home Ferthermore, governmert can ban a use of plastic as well as, promote substitute product which will fullfil the needs of people. For instance, Government should promot manufature componies who made paper bag and insist to use cotton and paper bag in all the local store and replace thermocol strow in place of plastic strow. Moreover, government should enlighten people with a consequences of use the non debiograded product and how its impact on our hebitant so, it become more easier to acchieve envirnment goal. Also, get them easilly available with biodegredable product. to sum up, We all have to know about the disadantages of non recyclable product and I believe that if government take step for this development then it become more effortless to achieve.
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scociety
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assart
that garbage are not recycled
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enough
which
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make
noticeable effect on nature. I believe that the
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government
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shoud
bring a focus on this issue and
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make
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some
law
thus
,
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people
are encouraged
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use
a recyclable
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products
. This essay will
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disscus
how individual and
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government
will take
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a
action for this development.

To
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begin
with, as being a part of the environment we all should be aware about how we
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can able to
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reduce
carbon footprint.
However
, as much as possible we tend to
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use
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product
which are able
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to recycled
.
For instance
, where we need to
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use
carry
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bag
, we
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must
go for paper
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bag
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insted
to plastic.
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, we can
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help
to waste collect
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commities
by
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saperation
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ot
garbage in a two group.
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one
which can be
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recycl
or one which can not. For that we can
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use
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different
dustbin in our
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home


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Ferthermore
,
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governmert
can ban a
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use
of plastic
as well
as, promote substitute
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product
which will
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fullfil
the needs of
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people
.
For instance
,
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Government
should
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promot
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manufature
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componies
who made paper
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bag
and insist to
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use
cotton and paper
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bag
in all the local store and replace
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thermocol
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strow
in place of plastic
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strow
.
Moreover
,
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government
should enlighten
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people
with
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a consequences
of
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use
the non
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debiograded
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product
and how its impact on our
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hebitant
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so
, it
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become
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more easier
to
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acchieve
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envirnment
goal.
Also
,
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get
them
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easilly
available with
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biodegredable
product.

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to
sum up, We all
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have to
know about the
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disadantages
of
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non recyclable
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product
and I believe that if
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government
take step for this development then it
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become
more effortless to achieve.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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