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In an increasing order professionals such as teachers and doctors are leave their own country to work their development countries. Explain reasons and solutions.

In an increasing order professionals such as teachers and doctors are leave their own country to work their development countries. Explain reasons and solutions. mm61
It is being witnessed that all experts such as teachers and doctors are migrant to developed countries. In this essay there are many reasons for responding this issue it is utmost important to take part necessary measures to overcome this issue Migration is predominant cause behind this because teachers and doctors are not satisfied their jobs because their salary is low but government took more work to them. All professional spend more time to their work like teachers spend 9 hours to their work place and doctors spend 24 hours to their job. For example a nred is published in the newspaper "Turbine"this news reveals that teachers and doctors doing strike for increasing their salary but government did not accept their appeal. In order to tackle this issue, their is a responsibility of organisations that they should gave their promotion to all experts so that they should not move to other country. As a result authority should increase the salary of all professionals. For example: a survey in interns to countries government gave more opportunities to all experts in every year. Summing up, migration is deep- rooted issue, yet organisation by working shoulder to shoulder it can be fixed and professionals are not leave their own country.
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being witnessed
that all experts such as
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teachers
and
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doctors
are migrant to developed
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countries
. In this essay there are
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many
reasons for responding this issue it is utmost
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important
to
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take part
necessary measures to overcome this issue

Migration is predominant cause behind this
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because
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teachers
and
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doctors
are not satisfied their jobs
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because
their salary is low
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but
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government
took more work to them. All professional spend more time to their work like
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teachers
spend 9 hours to their work place and
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doctors
spend 24 hours to their job.
For example
a
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nred
is published
in the newspaper
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Turbine
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this news reveals that
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teachers
and
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doctors
doing strike for increasing their salary
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but
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government
did not accept their appeal.

In order to tackle this issue,
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is a responsibility of
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organisations
that they should
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gave
their promotion to all experts
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that they should not
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move
to other
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country
.
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a result authority should increase the salary of all professionals.
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: a survey in interns to
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countries
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government
gave more opportunities to all experts in every year.

Summing up, migration is deep- rooted issue,
yet
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organisation
by working shoulder to shoulder it can be
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fixed
and professionals are not
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leave
their
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own
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IELTS essay In an increasing order professionals such as teachers and doctors are leave their own country to work their development countries. Explain reasons and solutions.

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