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some people belive ahappiniss / imotion is good foe healte while other say that phesical is the important for health discusse aida and give your openion

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IELTS essay some people belive ahappiniss / imotion is good foe healte while other say that phesical is the important for health discusse aida and give your openion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
241 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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