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Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax.Do you agree or disagree

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A number of individuals think that they must keep all the funds they ought gained and should not reward levy. I disagree with the statement I will discuss the reason in this essay. To begin with, If the people not recompense the tariff then country cannot run due to the fact that, How government form roads or other things? Autorities run the country from the money of tax. For example we pay the toll tax when we drive vehicles on roadways then that excise money law used to produce the highway or to maintain the pavement. Consequently, humans can go safely and easily from one place to another. Thus, it is a responsibility of mankind they ought to reimburse excise. Moreover, If government did not get the cash from people through tax then how they manage the country funds. From where they give pensions to widows, senior citizens and so on? In addition, the country become poor because person inclined the price of everything like petrol, rice, etcectra. Hence, it is proved that individuals must pay assessment for the betterment of country. To conclude, As I mentioned in the above paragraph the problem humans or government faced if they do not pay tax. So, for the sake of country people ought to pay tax.
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all the funds they ought gained and should not reward levy. I disagree with the statement I will discuss the reason in this essay. To
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begin
with, If the
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not recompense the tariff then
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country
cannot run due to the fact that, How
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government
form roads or other things?
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Autorities
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country
from the money of
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tax
. For
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the toll
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tax
when we drive vehicles on roadways then that excise money law
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used
to produce the highway or to maintain the pavement.
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, humans can go
safely
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easily
from one place to another.
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, it is a responsibility of mankind they ought to reimburse excise.
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, If
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government
did not
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the cash from
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through
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tax
then how they manage the
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funds. From where they give pensions to widows, senior citizens and
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on?
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become poor
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person inclined the price of everything like petrol, rice,
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etcectra
.
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that individuals
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must
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assessment for the betterment of
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country
.
To conclude
, As I mentioned in the above paragraph the problem humans or
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government
faced if they do not
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tax
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
214 words
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