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Some people believe that's the arts should receive subsidies or sponsorship from government and big companies. Others feel start spending is a luxury and that it would be better if it were interested in scientific projects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that's the arts should receive subsidies or sponsorship from government and big companies. Others feel start spending is a luxury and that it would be better if it were interested in scientific projects. VdbA
People have different views regarding money and resource expenditure. While some suggests that us would be more invested by government and companies, I strongly agree with those who who are convinced we shall spend more money in scientific projects to develop life or medicine, for instance. It's argued by some people that any kind of arts should be supported. We will not underestimate value of arts. Some people could say person who do not know and do not want to understand glory of arts are misguided. Of course we have to preserve ours we have to deliver this creations in original and pristine form to the next generations. Therefore museums are trying the most relevant ways to save exhibits which were created with sophisticated effort. Not everyone knows that Mona Lisa, Leonardo da Vinchi's astonishing picture was hid away in secret room during the world war 2. Generally, these treasures need protection. So will I put out more supplies for arts? In most cases people will claim, we will. On the other hand, i firmly convinced that it will be better if we invest more scientific projects, such as space exploration, medicine improving and producing new kinds of crops that will ensure us supplies for existing. Apparently, nowadays we have plenty of problems like starvation or environments pollution. I suppose we should solve these problems immediately. Finding solution for such of problems requires literal knowledge and demands investment. For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that supporting of science is more likely to be successful, although we may not forget and misjudge a wealth of works of art.
People
have
different
views regarding money and resource expenditure. While
some
suggests that us would be more invested by
government
and
companies
, I
strongly
agree
with those
who who
are convinced
we shall spend more money in scientific projects to develop life or medicine,
for instance
. It's argued by
some
people
that any kind of
arts
should
be supported
. We will not underestimate value of
arts
.
Some
people
could say person who do not know and do not want to understand glory of
arts
are misguided
. Of
course we
have to
preserve ours we
have to
deliver this creations in original and pristine form to the
next
generations.
Therefore
museums are trying the most relevant ways to save exhibits which
were created
with sophisticated effort. Not everyone knows that Mona Lisa, Leonardo
da
Vinchi
's astonishing picture
was hid
away in secret room during the
world war 2
.
Generally
, these treasures need protection.
So
will I put out more supplies for
arts
?
In most cases
people
will claim, we will.
On the other hand
,
i
firmly
convinced that it will be better if we invest more scientific projects, such as space exploration, medicine improving and producing new kinds of crops that will ensure us supplies for existing.
Apparently
, nowadays we have
plenty
of problems like starvation or environments pollution. I suppose we should solve these problems immediately. Finding solution for such of problems requires literal knowledge and demands investment. For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that supporting of science is more likely to be successful, although we may not forget and misjudge a wealth of works of
art
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that's the arts should receive subsidies or sponsorship from government and big companies. Others feel start spending is a luxury and that it would be better if it were interested in scientific projects.

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  American English
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270 words
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