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Some people believe that we should do our best to mitigate the effects of climate change, while others believe that we should learn how to live with it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that we should do our best to mitigate the effects of climate change, while others believe that we should learn how to live with it. dkdEK
It is considered by many that people should do their best to lessen global warming’s effects, but others believe that we should get used to living with it. I think that despite being the irreversible effects that global change brings about, we exactly seek to solve this problem rather than accepting. First, without taking precautions, the condition of the world can become worse or deteriorate by only learning how to live with climate change. Therefore, we should make people more conscious of its effect and take some measures to mitigate it. For example, the government and conservation organizations promote people to get about using biodegradable materials instead of using disposable ones such as plastics. Hence, we might contribute to this change positively to be a reversible effect. However, many scholars think that this situation becomes irreversible, which does not help people stop this change. Thus, ones which encounter problems related to climate change must get used to situations, resulting in decreasing its harm and damage and thus saving people’s life. For instance, in northern Turkey towns flood with heavy rain, and landscapes occur more often compared to the past because of global changes. Therefore, inhabitants should readjust to new conditions by changing town plans or the location of their houses. In my opinion, although climate change’s effects are being more apparent day by day, this problem only solves by humans. However, this comes out with human mistakes, it will simply be sorted out by them. If the government and all societies cooperate and they are educated about its adverse effects, I think we cope with this situation. In conclusion, even if people prefer to spend their time getting used to the world’s extraordinary conditions, they must tend to be cared to stop these conditions by being increased their awareness.
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should do their best to lessen global warming’s effects,
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others believe that we should
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get
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to living with it. I
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think
that despite being the irreversible effects that global
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change
brings about, we exactly seek to solve this problem
rather
than accepting.

First
, without taking precautions, the
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condition
of the world can become worse or deteriorate by
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only
learning how to
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live
with climate
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change
.
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, we should
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make
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people
more conscious of its
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effect
and take
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some
measures to mitigate it.
For example
, the
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government
and conservation organizations promote
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people
to
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get
about using biodegradable materials
instead
of using disposable ones such as plastics.
Hence
, we might contribute to this
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change
positively
to be a reversible effect.

However
,
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many
scholars
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think
that this situation becomes irreversible, which does not
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help
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people
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stop
this
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change
.
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, ones which encounter problems related to climate
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change
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must
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get
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to situations, resulting in decreasing its harm and damage and
thus
saving
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people’s
life.
For instance
, in northern Turkey towns flood with heavy rain, and landscapes occur more
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often
compared to the past
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because
of global
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changes
.
Therefore
, inhabitants should readjust to new conditions by changing town plans or the location of their
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houses
.

In my opinion, although climate
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change’s
effects are being more apparent day by day, this problem
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only
solves by humans.
However
, this
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comes
out with human mistakes, it will
simply
be sorted
out by them. If the
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government
and all societies
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cooperate and
they
are educated
about its adverse effects, I
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think
we cope with this situation.

In conclusion
, even if
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people
prefer to spend their time getting
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used
to the world’s extraordinary conditions, they
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must
tend to
be cared
to
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stop
these conditions by
being increased
their awareness.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that we should do our best to mitigate the effects of climate change, while others believe that we should learn how to live with it.

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