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Some people believe that visual images such as photos and videos provide enough evidence that a crime was committed. Other think that, they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that visual images such as photos and videos provide enough evidence that a crime was committed. Other think that, they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed. jXg8
In these days there are many crime is been filed in particular department. But finding culprit by the evidence of photos and videos are not sufficient, believed by some. Others says such a footages are enough evidence for detect the person who did it. In this essay am going to explain about both factors and will give the personal opinion lastly. First of all, nowadays everywhere we can see the CCTV cemara in the main region where rapidly people are moving around. This camera has been established for mainly two reason. First one is to secure people from any kind of crime crime that should not happen. The other major reason is to determine the particular event or person, in case any theft of illegal things occurrence. For instance, last few days ago I happened to see a theft on the road when I went along side. But I was scaring to report it to the police station because of some adverse effect may revert towards me. So later on I saw in the newspaper, the culprit had been found by cops by cctv evidence. Secondly, the footages like photos and vedio alone cannot some time worthy to spot out the person. This may due to imaging fault and that man can be provided any strong illegally created documents for escaping from the footages. So beyond the evidence of visual images another peculiar factors are required to capture the event. For example, if an individual committed some illegal activities in the place where no cctv or other images not established, in that scenario obtaining justification more complicated one. In conclusion, it is necessary to rule out strongly to have more effective methods by using current technology. So that crime rate and antisocial activist can be detected within the time periods.
In these days there are
many
crime
is been
filed
in particular
department.
But
finding culprit by the
evidence
of photos and videos are not sufficient, believed by
some
.
Others says
such
a footages
are
enough
evidence
for detect the person who did it. In this essay
am
going to
explain
about both factors and will give the personal opinion
lastly
.
First of all
, nowadays everywhere we can
see
the CCTV
cemara
in the main region where
rapidly
people
are moving around. This camera has
been established
for
mainly
two reason.
First
one is to secure
people
from any kind of
crime
crime
that should not happen. The other major reason is to determine the particular
event
or person, in case any theft of illegal
things
occurrence.
For instance
, last few days ago I happened to
see
a theft on the road when I went
along side
.
But
I was scaring to report it to the police station
because
of
some
adverse effect may revert towards me.
So
later on I
saw
in the newspaper, the culprit had
been found
by cops by
cctv
evidence
.
Secondly
, the
footages
like photos and
vedio
alone cannot
some
time worthy to spot out the person. This may due to imaging fault and that
man
can
be provided
any strong
illegally
created documents for escaping from the
footages
.
So
beyond the
evidence
of visual images another peculiar factors
are required
to capture the
event
.
For example
, if an individual committed
some
illegal activities in the place where no
cctv
or other images not established, in that scenario obtaining justification more complicated one.
In conclusion
, it is necessary to
rule
out
strongly
to have more effective methods by using
current
technology.
So
that
crime
rate and antisocial activist can
be detected
within the time periods.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that visual images such as photos and videos provide enough evidence that a crime was committed. Other think that, they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed.

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  American English
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300 words
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