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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customers and behaviour. others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customers and behaviour. others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. WMqD
Whether to accept cultural differences or not? This has been highlighting debate over years. Well, This topic has wide range of views of people. In this assay, I will be discussing both sides of discussion. To begin with, Every country has their own traditions, numerous values and behaviors. Undoubtedly, It could be varying from country to country. Many tourists who have found enjoyed by simply adopting local customs and behaviors. Some have been exploring the differences and some might feel awkward to do so. For instance, In country like India, There is one tradition; Gathering two hands which called “namaste” in the temples. Despite of unknowingly the reasons, It has been report that large numbers of foreigners have been doing namaste at Amati temple of India. In addition to, This behavior shows willingness to accept cultural differences. However, Besides this it can be an urge of exploring variables. On the other hand, Most country remained amazed by simply observing the complete opposite personality of visitors. Moreover, overtime it probably becomes familiar with local people. Take an example, In Kerala it is mandatory for females to wear a traditional attire called “sari” during particular prayer sessions. While, males wearing a “dhotis”. However, not all foreigners are comfortable and used to wear a such outfits unless they are ready to wear. This resulted into visitors restricts their travel due to such reasons. To my opinion, Host country should happily employ the Cultural differences that visitors does have. Compulsion behavior must be avoided for visitors in order to make their journey restriction less and convenient one.
Whether to accept cultural
differences
or not? This has been highlighting debate over years. Well, This topic has wide range of views of
people
. In this assay, I will be discussing both sides of discussion. To
begin
with, Every
country
has their
own
traditions, numerous values and
behaviors
.
Undoubtedly
, It could be varying from
country
to
country
.
Many
tourists who have found enjoyed by
simply
adopting local customs and
behaviors
.
Some
have been exploring the
differences
and
some
might feel awkward to do
so
.
For instance
, In
country
like India, There is one tradition; Gathering two hands which called “namaste” in the temples.
Despite of
unknowingly
the reasons, It has been report that large numbers of foreigners have been doing namaste at Amati temple of India.
In addition
to, This
behavior
shows
willingness to accept cultural
differences
.
However
,
Besides
this it can be an urge of exploring variables.
On the other hand
, Most
country
remained amazed by
simply
observing the complete opposite personality of
visitors
.
Moreover
, overtime it
probably
becomes familiar with local
people
. Take an example, In Kerala it is mandatory for females to wear a traditional attire called “sari” during particular prayer sessions.
While
, males wearing a “dhotis”.
However
, not all foreigners are comfortable and
used
to wear a such outfits unless they are ready to wear. This resulted into
visitors
restricts their travel due to such reasons. To my opinion, Host
country
should
happily
employ the Cultural
differences
that
visitors
does have. Compulsion
behavior
must
be avoided
for
visitors
in order to
make
their journey restriction less and convenient one.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customers and behaviour. others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.

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  American English
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263 words
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