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Some people believe that using a bicycle as your main form of transport has a lot of advantages, whereas others think that it has many disadvantages. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that using a bicycle as your main form of transport has a lot of advantages, whereas others think that it has many disadvantages. KwnyM
It has been assumed that using bicycle as though your main transport can have more benefits. In spite of health and financial benefits, it can have drawbacks like collisions and burst. In my point of view, it will be good to use bicycle for short trips. Bicycle is a very cheaper option than everything in transport and also It has more health benefits such as: mental health, reduce stress, and improve general mood of human and somehow doctors recommend to use bicycle in order to promote your overall health. Due to the fact that we are able to use wherever we are, whomever we are and whatever we want to do by. An example would be my own from my late 15s years when I have got depression, consequently, doctors advised me to use bicycle to improve my mental health and also allow my body to produce more healthy cells and hormones. As I have said that it is more advantageous than other transportation. As it has been said "Use everything thing directly but not bicycle and bike". Bicycle is not for everyone except professionals cyclists, otherwise it will have multiple drawbacks. For example, my brother was riding his friend bicycle in India soon after his other friend collided with his bicycle and he slipped on the slede. After 15 days in local hospital he died. To sum up, it is more beneficial to use bicycle when we need if not we will have some destiny. Above all, A bicycle must be used in order to make everything cheaper not for other purposes.
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been assumed
that using
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bicycle
as though your main transport can have more benefits.
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In spite of
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health
and financial benefits, it can have drawbacks like collisions and burst. In my point of view, it will be
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good
to
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use
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bicycle
for short trips.

Bicycle is a
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very
cheaper option than everything in transport and
also
It has more
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health
benefits such as: mental
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health
,
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reduce
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stress
, and
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improve
general mood of human and somehow doctors recommend to
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use
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bicycle
in order to promote your
overall
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health
. Due to the fact that we are able to
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use
wherever we are, whomever we are and whatever we want to do by. An example would be my
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own
from my late 15s years when I have
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got
depression,
consequently
, doctors advised me to
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use
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bicycle
to
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improve
my mental
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health
and
also
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allow
my body to produce more healthy cells and hormones.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
I have said that it is more advantageous than other transportation.

As it has
been said
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"
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Use
everything thing
directly
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but
not
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bicycle
and bike
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"
.

Bicycle is not for everyone except professionals cyclists,
otherwise
it will have multiple drawbacks.
For example
, my brother was riding his friend
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bicycle
in India
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soon
after his other friend collided with his
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bicycle and
he slipped on the
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slede
.
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After
15 days in local hospital he
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died
.

To sum up, it is more beneficial to
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use
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bicycle
when we need if not we will have
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some
destiny.

Above all
, A
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bicycle
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must
be
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used
in order to
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make
everything cheaper not for other purposes.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that using a bicycle as your main form of transport has a lot of advantages, whereas others think that it has many disadvantages.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
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