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Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not to pay tax to the state To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not to pay tax to the state dR0p
It is argued that some humans are thinking they have earning money, they should keeping all the cash and do not paying taxes to the Kingdom. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that whatever people do not pay tax what happens to the state. First of all, I believe paying taxes are very important for our society and government. Eeven people doesn't pay tax to the government then what happens to the growth of the state, but if our community give the wages to the governmental then our state growing to the start. For examples roads are developing, then schools are bulide for children and hospital also are set up for illnes people, and some humans are poor give the food from government etc. That's why it is necessary to pay taxes to the government. Secondly, today is money everything our lifestyle if there is no cash our life then we do not live the life. Some people thinking they tax are not important our society life. because they believe government are not doing job properly for the community they are not helping the humans priority. In fact the tax are paying the properly then government helping the citizens, but some citizens are not listening to the governmental they do the own way, but if tax is coming proper way after the government developing start. for illustration then economic growth fast and developing the counties, and give the facility likes water, electricity, transportation, schools, colleges, hospitals, buildings, food etc this all facility gave the governer. Thus advantages of paying taxes to the governer for better facility and growth of countries. In conclusion, I strongly believe pay taxes is more beneficial for the citizens because it is doing for our best give the life.
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is argued
that
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some
humans are thinking they have earning money, they should
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keeping
all the cash and do not
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paying
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taxes
to the Kingdom. I completely disagree with this opinion and
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think
that whatever
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people
do not
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pay
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tax
what happens to the state.

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First of all
, I believe
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paying
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taxes
are
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very
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important
for our society and
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government
.
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Eeven
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people
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doesn
't
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pay
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tax
to the
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government
then what happens to the growth of the state,
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but
if our community
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give
the wages to the governmental then our state growing to the
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start
. For examples roads are developing, then schools are
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bulide
for children and hospital
also
are set
up for
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illnes
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people
, and
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some
humans are poor
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give
the food from
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government
etc. That's why it is necessary to
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pay
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taxes
to the
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government
.

Secondly
,
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today
is money everything our lifestyle if there is no cash our
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life
then we do not
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live
the
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life
.
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Some
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people
thinking they
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tax
are not
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important
our society
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life
.
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because
they believe
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government
are not doing job
properly
for the community they are not helping the
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humans
priority. In fact the
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tax
are
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paying
the
properly
then
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government
helping the citizens,
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but
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some
citizens are not listening to the governmental they do the
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own
way,
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but
if
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tax
is coming proper way after the
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government
developing
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start
.
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for
illustration then economic growth
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fast
and developing the counties, and
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give
the facility likes water, electricity, transportation, schools, colleges, hospitals, buildings, food etc this all facility gave the
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governer
.
Thus
advantages of
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paying
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taxes
to the
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governer
for better facility and growth of countries.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe
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pay
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taxes
is more beneficial for the citizens
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because
it is doing for our best
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give
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not to pay tax to the state

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  American English
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295 words
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