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Some people believe that the only important thing in life is his or her work. Without a successful career, life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people believe that the only important thing in life is his or her work. Without a successful career, life is meaningless. e6Jx
Many people beleive that the work is too essential for everyone 's and acheive their goals. However, some of the individuals says that without work people can do not entirely complete basic needs in life. It is clear that, there are many other factors play a significant key role in everyone life. It is a debatable topic. Consequently, I am not fully agree with this statement and will discuss both sides in succeeding paragraphs. On the one hand, some people think that the work is important for get their ambitions. First and foremost, without any work how can possible people can easily complete basic needs of the family members. In the Uk country, the survey was also conduct and due to the fact that people were also expenditure more money on their work. For instance, when the person do the work in a better job than they can easily keep stay happy and healthy to her family members. As a result, when the only one person do the work than they suffer from many problem like as, sometimes the person take a stress about work and family. On the other hand, there are other factors have been desirable for successful life. As far know, most of the individuals have been less educated in Indian county than how can possible they are joined better job in large cities than due to without job they can do not success in future life, however there are various different types ofwork are available than they can do it because hard work is the success of key. Consequently, individuals can easily get their goals for better long life. In conclusion, according to me, work is work is not a small or large foreveryone because work is also important for everything and they can't be possible life.
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beleive
that the
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work
is too essential for everyone 's and
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acheive
their goals.
However
,
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some of the
individuals says that without
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work
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people
can do not
entirely
complete basic needs in
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life
. It is
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clear
that, there are
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many
other factors play a significant key role in everyone
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life
. It is a debatable topic.
Consequently
, I am not
fully
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agree
with this statement and will discuss both sides in succeeding paragraphs. On the one hand,
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some
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people
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think
that the
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work
is
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important
for
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get
their ambitions.
First
and foremost, without any
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work
how can possible
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people
can
easily
complete basic needs of the family members. In the
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Uk
country, the survey was
also
conduct and due to the fact that
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people
were
also
expenditure more money on their
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work
.
For instance
, when the person
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do
the
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work
in a better job than they can
easily
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keep
stay happy and healthy to her family members.
As a result
, when the
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only
one person do the
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work
than they suffer from
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many
problem like as,
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sometimes
the person take a
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stress
about
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work
and family.
On the other hand
, there are other factors have been desirable for successful
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life
. As far know, most of the individuals have been less educated in Indian county than how can possible they are
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joined
better job in large cities than due to without job they can do not success in future
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life
,
however
there are various
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different
types
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ofwork
are available than they can do it
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because
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hard
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work
is the success of key.
Consequently
, individuals can
easily
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get
their goals for better long
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life
.
In conclusion
, according to me,
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work
is
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work
is not a
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small
or large
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foreveryone
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because
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work
is
also
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important
for
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everything and
they can't be possible
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IELTS essay Some people believe that the only important thing in life is his or her work. Without a successful career, life is meaningless.

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301 words
5.0
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