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Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Income inequality is a major global concern. Some people are of the opinion that the difference in income, between the highest paid worker and the lowest paid worker, should be lessened. This essay will argue why I completely agree with this opinion and provide reasons for the same. Reducing the difference in wages between the highest paid job and the lowest paid job will improve the living standards of the extreme poor. The extra income will enable these people to meet their basic needs. Although the rich will crib with the reduced income, their living standards will not take a big hit. For Example: The increased income for a poor homeless man may enable him to rent a single room while the reduced income of an affluent man may force him to move from a 5-bedroom house, which he does not need, to a slightly smaller house. The benefits for the poor far outweigh the slight discomfort caused to the rich. Another advantage of reducing the difference in pay, will be a better distribution of wealth among society. Currently, the difference in income between the extreme rich and the extreme poor is huge. This results in the rich becoming richer and the poor becoming poorer over a period of time. For Example: As of today, the richest 10% of the world’s population earn 80% of the world’s total wealth. While the rest 90%, have to share the remaining 20% of the wealth. This step will help in a fairer distribution of wealth. In conclusion, the difference in pay between the highest paid jobs and the lowest paid jobs is already very high. This essay discussed the two main benefits of reducing this gap, both on an individual and society level. In my opinion this reduction in income imbalance is an absolute necessity in current times.
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inequality is a major global concern.
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Some
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people
are of the opinion that the
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difference
in
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income
, between the highest
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paid
worker and the lowest
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worker, should
be lessened
. This essay will argue why I completely
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agree
with this opinion and provide reasons for the same.

Reducing the
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difference
in wages between the highest
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paid
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job
and the lowest
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paid
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job
will
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improve
the living standards of the extreme
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poor
. The extra
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income
will enable these
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people
to
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meet
their basic needs. Although the rich will crib with the
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reduced
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income
, their living standards will not take a
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big
hit.
For Example
: The increased
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income
for a
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poor
homeless
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man
may enable him to rent a single room while the
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reduced
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income
of an affluent
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man
may force him to
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move
from a 5-bedroom
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house
, which he does not need, to a
slightly
smaller
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house
. The benefits for the
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poor
far outweigh the slight discomfort caused to the rich.

Another advantage of reducing the
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difference
in pay, will be a better distribution of wealth among society.
Currently
, the
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difference
in
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income
between the extreme rich and the extreme
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poor
is huge. This results in the rich becoming richer and the
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poor
becoming poorer over a period of time.
For Example
: As of
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today
, the richest 10% of the world’s population earn 80% of the world’s total wealth. While the rest 90%,
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have to
share the remaining 20% of the wealth. This step will
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help
in a fairer distribution of wealth.

In conclusion
, the
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difference
in pay between the highest
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paid
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jobs
and the lowest
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paid
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jobs
is already
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very
high. This essay discussed the two main benefits of reducing this gap, both on an individual and society level. In my opinion this reduction in
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income
imbalance is an absolute necessity in
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current
times.

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IELTS essay Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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