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Some people believe that the best way to reduce traffic congestion is to increase the price of petrol.

Some people believe that the best way to reduce traffic congestion is to increase the price of petrol. MBP8o
It is generally agreed that higher petrol prices are the most effective way to solve traffic congestion. These days, there is overcrowding in urban areas where more and more people use private vehicles such as cars and motorbikes, which are devices that consume petrol. More people means an increased number of vehicles day by day which leads to traffic congestion. If petrol prices are unaffordable, people will be less likely to use their private vehicles frequently and they will be encouraged to go to work and back to home by public transports such as buses, and trains in peak hours. For example, this would lead to a decrease in use of cars and thus to pollution reduction.
It is
generally
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agreed
that higher petrol prices are the most effective way to solve traffic congestion. These days, there is overcrowding in urban areas where more and more
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people
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use
private vehicles such as cars and motorbikes, which are devices that consume petrol. More
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people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
means
an increased number of vehicles day by day which leads to traffic congestion. If petrol prices are unaffordable,
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people
will be less likely to
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use
their private vehicles
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
frequently and
they will
be encouraged
to go to work and back to home by public transports such as buses, and trains in peak hours.
For example
, this would lead to a decrease in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of cars and
thus
to pollution reduction.

IELTS essay Some people believe that the best way to reduce traffic congestion is to increase the price of petrol.

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