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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. GBGe

Many people believe that youngsters should be encouraged to participate in unpaid community activities whenever they have free time and should even take time out of their daily schedule to contribute their bit to the society and the environment. I strongly agree with this statement and in this essay, I will support it with some examples. Firstly, doing free-voluntary activities help an individual to become more responsible for community. These kinds of jobs induce a sense of understanding about the environment. For instance, in Japan, every student does cleaning of the classrooms, plant trees in their localities and thus realize the importance of. As these youngsters grow, they develop a habit to maintain the cleanliness in their surroundings. Secondly, working for the community and the environment gives an opportunity to socialize as they get to work as a team and tend to communicate with variety of people from different background. with varying back. These kind of activities,

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