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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. BEXa
Education is fundemental biulding block that gives children the best way to start walking through life. Schools is the best place the assures this oppurtionity which emphasises the child's development. Some peaple disagree and think that home schools is the best way for future generations. Fisrt of all, school is the best place for a litle child. It is very special experiance, it's the place where he makes friends for the first time. the child must abay the rules, learn how to manage time, be responsible. Moreover, most schools set a schedule full of acitivities and the needed information that must be taught based on each level and class. Most schools set sports hours which support the hobbies of the kids and help them imporving their hobbies and skills. On the other hand, some children have special medical cases which is better for them to ist for home schools. Also, at home when the kid is being teached alone, he will the only point on interest. Thus the teacher will make that the child got all the needed information. Moreover, we all know that kids can get sick very fast, so when staying home they will get in contact with others so they will stay healthy. Considering the adavantages for both teaching methods, i am with school teaching which is better for both parents and children. The children is given the needed information with tranined teachers. Nowadays, we are facing the most critical health situation in teh world in which students aer attending schools at home. they are suffering from big problems of understanding the materials and they are feeling lonely with meeting any of their friends. To conclude, teaching is very important for children. Some people prefere to send their childern to schools whereas other with the home learning. Childern are God's gift for paranets, they care about their mental health and psychological life as well and the future development. Home school will make it easier too stay away from diseases but not away from the psychological ones.
Education is
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fundemental
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biulding
block that gives
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children
the
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best
way to
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start
walking through life.
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Schools
is the
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best
place the assures this
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oppurtionity
which
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emphasises
the child's development.
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Some
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peaple
disagree and
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think
that home
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schools
is the
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best
way for future generations.

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Fisrt
of all,
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school
is the
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best
place for a
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litle
child. It is
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very
special
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experiance
, it's the place where he
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makes
friends for the
first
time.
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the
child
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must
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abay
the
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rules
, learn how to manage time, be responsible.
Moreover
, most
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schools
set a schedule full of
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acitivities
and the needed information that
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must
be taught
based on each level and
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class
. Most
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schools
set sports hours which support the hobbies of the kids and
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help
them
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imporving
their hobbies and
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skills
.

On the other hand
,
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some
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children
have special medical cases which is better for them to
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ist
for home
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schools
.
Also
, at home when the kid is being
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teached
alone, he will the
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only
point on interest.
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Thus
the teacher will
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make
that the child
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got
all the needed information.
Moreover
, we all know that kids can
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get
sick
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very
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fast
,
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so
when staying home they will
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get
in contact with others
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so
they will stay healthy.

Considering the
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adavantages
for both teaching methods,
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i
am with
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school
teaching which is better for both parents and
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children
. The
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children
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is
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given
the needed information with
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tranined
teachers. Nowadays, we are facing the most critical health situation in
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teh
world in which students
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aer
attending
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schools
at home.
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they
are suffering from
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big
problems of understanding the
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materials and
they are feeling lonely with meeting any of their friends.

To conclude
, teaching is
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very
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important
for
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children
.
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Some
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people
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prefere
to
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send
their
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childern
to
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schools
whereas other with the home learning.
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Childern
are God's gift for
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paranets
, they care about their mental health and psychological life
as well
and the future development. Home
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school
will
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make
it easier
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too stay
away from diseases
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but
not away from the psychological ones.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
339 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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