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some people believe that taxing companies which cause pollution is best way to reduce industrial pollution while some suggest that there are several other ways to solve this trouble. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

some people believe that taxing companies which cause pollution is best way to reduce industrial pollution while some suggest that there are several other ways to solve this trouble. qdVp
Day by day Increasing in pollution has become critical issue that will lead to serious consequences. Several people opine that government need to impose extra taxes on industries that produce more pollution. Whereas, other argue that taxes are no only method to cope-up this sage. I will discuss both viewpoints and my opinion. To commence, taxes are major weapon that can be used by government to deal with any serious issue. There are plenty off industries that originate huge quantity of pollution. If higher authorities will be imposed high tax rate on such industrial unit then they will put their best efforts to deal with pollution. Many manufacturers used old machinery that create more quantity of pollution. For instance, car of old model and without repair will generate more pollution as compare to latest car model same thing happened with industrial machines so, industrial will upgrade their technology. Moreover, latest machine will help to cut down cost and high production as result of high tax rate. On the other side, although increase in tax rate can be efficient method but it can not be only way to check on pollution. Government and individual can plant more trees to save environment as tree give fresh air and inhale co2 that is very dangerous for human being. Apart from this, trees are helpful to enhance the beauty of nature so, plantation of more and more tree can be another method of pollution. Furthermore, government need to put a limit on factors that leads to global warming such as air conditioner. To conclude, charging higher rate of traffic from industries can be effective way to subdue this sage but it is social responsibility of individual to step forward and give a hand to deal with pollution otherwise, human will face dangerous conclusion in coming years
Day by day Increasing in
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pollution
has become critical issue that will lead to serious consequences. Several
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people
opine that
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government
need to impose extra
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taxes
on industries that produce more
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pollution
.
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Whereas
, other argue that
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taxes
are no
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only
method to cope-up this sage. I will discuss both viewpoints and my opinion.

To commence,
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taxes
are major weapon that can be
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used
by
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government
to deal with any serious issue. There are
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plenty
off industries that originate huge quantity of
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pollution
. If higher authorities will
be imposed
high
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tax
rate on such industrial unit then they will put their best efforts to deal with
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pollution
.
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Many
manufacturers
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used
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old
machinery that create more quantity of
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pollution
.
For instance
, car of
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old
model and without repair will generate more
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pollution
as compare to
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latest
car model same thing happened with industrial machines
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so
, industrial will upgrade their technology.
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,
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latest
machine will
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help
to
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cut
down cost and high production as result of high
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tax
rate.

On the other side, although increase in
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tax
rate can be efficient method
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but
it can not be
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only
way to
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check
on
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pollution
.
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Government
and individual can plant more
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trees
to save environment as
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tree
give fresh air and inhale co2
that is
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very
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dangerous
for human being. Apart from this,
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trees
are helpful to enhance the beauty of nature
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so
, plantation of more and more
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tree
can be another method of
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pollution
.
Furthermore
,
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government
need to put a limit on factors that leads to global warming such as air conditioner.

To conclude
, charging higher rate of traffic from industries can be
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effective
way to subdue this sage
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but
it is social responsibility of individual to step forward and give a hand to deal with
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pollution
otherwise
, human will face
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dangerous
conclusion in coming years
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IELTS essay some people believe that taxing companies which cause pollution is best way to reduce industrial pollution while some suggest that there are several other ways to solve this trouble.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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