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Some people believe that studying online is the best way to learn. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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During this pandemic many schools are having virtual classes. Some people are convinced that online learning is the best method to learn. I agree that online learning is the best option. This essay will prove why online learning is the best method to learn. Firstly, studying online can help students to get more comfortable with their learning environment. With the ability to study anywhere, students can learn where they want, where they get comfortable with. For instance some students might hate studying at school since it’s uncomfortable and noisy, so they can learn from their room or wherever they want if they study online. Secondly, studying online is time saving. Most people spend at least 30 minutes getting ready and 15 minutes on their way to school also coming back home. In contrast, if they’re studying from home, they don’t even need this much time to get ready. 5 minutes is more than enough for students to get access to their online class. So they can use that time to relax or to review what they have learnt or to do whatever they want. Finally, studying online might help students to concentrate more on their work. Some students usually get distracted by noises or their friends around them at school. So studying at home might be better since they study alone. In conclusion, I believe that online learning has important advantages for students since it’s comfortable, time saving and students are more concentrated.
During this pandemic
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are having virtual classes.
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people
are convinced
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online
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learning
is the best method to learn. I
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online
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learning
is the best option. This essay will prove why
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online
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is the best method to learn.

Firstly
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online
can
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help
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students
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get
more comfortable with their
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learning
environment. With the ability to study anywhere,
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students
can learn where they want, where they
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get
comfortable with.
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at
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since it’s uncomfortable and noisy,
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they can learn from their room or wherever they want if they study online.

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saving. Most
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spend at least 30 minutes getting ready and 15 minutes on their way to
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also
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from home, they don’t even need this much
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ready. 5 minutes is more than
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access to their
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to relax or to review what they have
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or to do whatever they want.

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might
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help
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students
to concentrate more on their work.
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students
usually
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distracted by noises or their friends around them at
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.
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at home might be better since they study alone.

In conclusion
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has
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advantages for
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since it’s comfortable,
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saving and
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students
are more concentrated.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that studying online is the best way to learn. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
243 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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