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Some people believe that starting school at early age is very benificial for children while others believe that children must stay home an attend school at the age of seven.

Some people believe that starting school at early age is very benificial for children while others believe that children must stay home an attend school at the age of seven. YLg8r
Some people believe that starting school at early age is very benificial for children while others believe that children must stay home an attend school at the age of seven. In the following paragraphs a good education is an essintial part of a child's development. Although both public and private schools provide education and opportunies for students, parents should evaluate the differences and choose the option that best suits their child and families needs. In this essay, I will compare and contrast five major areas that relate to public and private schools including class size, cost, cirriculum, services and teachers. Fistly, some people give their children to the primary school in our country. They want to get the best knowledge in their future and pay much money for their education. An experienced teachers teach with skilling skills. In other way, there are many extra activities and circles. These activities are trained deeply. A master trainers give some new information besides workbook. In addition, pupils are provided different types of meals four times a day. This way help our children grow healthy and strong. It helps to pupils learn well. Secondly, our public schools are fit out with modern equipments. Nowadays, almost children go to public school. This type of school is free and protected by our government. They are always controlled and checked by Educational Ministry. The best way that their building are located near their house. Children go to school on foot and they do not spend much money for the public transports. All the times pupils are supervised by the parents. They grow up among their family. They do their homework with their father or mother and family members. At the present time in every developed country and abroads do not have free education. As a result of their young generations are unlearned. In the conclusion, I will say that the school chosen as an investment in our child's future and not a decision to be made lightly. Education is vital in today's society. Parents will always want what is the best for their child especially. The better to teaching system must belong to our life. Deciding what and where to receive the best study is always going to be a question for the masses.
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at early age is
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benificial
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children
while others believe that
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must
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an attend
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at the age of seven. In the following paragraphs a
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good
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education
is an
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essintial
part of a child's development. Although both
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public
and private
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schools
provide
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education
and
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opportunies
for students, parents should evaluate the differences and choose the option that
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best
suits their child and families needs. In this essay, I will compare and contrast five major areas that relate to
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public
and private
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schools
including
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class
size, cost,
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cirriculum
, services and teachers.
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Fistly
,
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some
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people
give their
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children
to the primary
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school
in our country. They want to
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get
the
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best
knowledge in their future and pay much money for their
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education
. An experienced
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teachers
teach with
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skilling
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skills
. In other way, there are
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many
extra activities and circles. These activities
are trained
deeply
. A master trainers give
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some
new information
besides
workbook.
In addition
, pupils
are provided
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different
types of meals four times a day. This way
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help
our
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children
grow healthy and strong. It
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helps
to pupils learn well.
Secondly
, our
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public
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schools
are fit
out with modern equipments. Nowadays, almost
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children
go to
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public
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school
. This type of
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school
is free and protected by our
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government
. They are always controlled and
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checked
by Educational Ministry. The
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best
way that their building
are located
near their
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house
.
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Children
go to
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school
on
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foot and
they do not spend much money for the
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public
transports. All the times pupils
are supervised
by the parents. They grow up among their family. They do their homework with their father or mother and family members. At the present time in every
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developed country
and
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abroads
do not have free
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education
.
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As
a result of their young generations
are unlearned
. In the conclusion, I will say that the
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school
chosen as an investment in our child's future and not a decision to
be made
lightly
.
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Education
is vital in
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today
's society. Parents will always want what is the
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best
for their child
especially
. The better to teaching system
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must
belong to our life. Deciding what and where to receive the
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best
study is always going to be a question for the masses.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that starting school at early age is very benificial for children while others believe that children must stay home an attend school at the age of seven.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
377 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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