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Life cycle of a butterfly

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The picture illustrates the stages in the life of a butterfly, from birth to maturity. Overall, it is clear that there are five main stages as the butterfly develops from eggs to mature adults. Furthermore, butterflies spend time in two distinct locations during the cycle. Looking at the picture in detail, we can see that the life cycle begins when eggs are laid on tree leaves. After a period of time, each egg hatches, and a caterpillar appears. Gradually, when the caterpillars grow up, they will transform into a chrysalis with a great cocoon and be hanged on trees. At the next stage, the cocoon begins to open and it becomes an adult emerges. The most striking development of an adult emerges is that wings are started to appear, as the butterfly unfurls its wings in order to dry out. Finally, in a few hours, wings will be opened in their full size, and the cocoon is being left on the tree.
The picture illustrates the stages in the life of a
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butterfly
, from birth to maturity.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that there are five main stages as the
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butterfly
develops from eggs to mature adults.
Furthermore
,
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butterflies
spend time in two distinct locations during the cycle.

Looking at the picture in detail, we can
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see
that the life cycle
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begins
when eggs
are laid
on tree
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leaves
. After a period of time, each egg hatches, and a caterpillar appears.
Gradually
, when the caterpillars grow up, they will transform into a chrysalis with a great cocoon and
be hanged
on trees.

At the
next
stage, the cocoon
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begins
to open and it becomes an adult emerges. The most striking development of an adult emerges is that wings are
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started
to appear, as the
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butterfly
unfurls its wings in order to dry out.
Finally
, in a few hours, wings will
be opened
in their full size, and the cocoon is being
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left
on the tree.
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IELTS essay Life cycle of a butterfly

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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