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Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In modern period, there has been a great increment in a large category of people considering that by reading books one can develop more imagination and language skills rather than by watching television. As such, they are both pros and cons to this trend, although I consider accepting this tendency that its merits surpass the demerits. To begin with, there are numerous arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that who read more books can tackle with various difficulties that may arise in their life. It cannot only contribute to gain knowledge about social norms and values, but also leads to a wide array of benefits in almost all areas of life. For instance, who are reading books and creating new skills are being famous day by day but no person is there who is doing good works by watching television. Needless to say, all these upsides stand in a good position, when it comes to achieving excellence in various fields. Similarly, an increasingly significant aspect of this proposition is that people who read book can become mentally strong whereas those who watch TV are worsening their eyes day by day. In addition to that, when practice of reading books is followed religiously, one can broaden his horizons with great ease, comfort and convenience. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor to this trend. From what has been discussed above, it can unrguably be concluded that, notwithstanding the drawbacks, the overwhelming benefits of reading books are indeed too great to ignore.
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people
considering that by
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reading
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books
one can develop more imagination and language
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skills
rather
than by watching television. As such, they are both pros and cons to this trend, although I consider accepting this tendency that its merits surpass the demerits.

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begin
with, there are numerous arguments in
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of my stance. The most preponderant one is that
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who
read more
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books
can tackle with various difficulties that may arise in their life. It cannot
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only
contribute to gain knowledge about social norms and values,
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but
also
leads to a wide array of benefits in almost all areas of life.
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,
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are
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reading
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books
and creating new
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skills
are being
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famous
day by day
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but
no person is there
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is doing
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works by watching television. Needless to say, all these upsides stand in a
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good
position, when it
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comes
to achieving excellence in various fields.

Similarly
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increasingly
significant aspect of this proposition is that
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people
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who
read
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book
can become mentally strong whereas those
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who
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watch
TV are worsening their eyes day by day.
In addition
to that, when practice of
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reading
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books
is followed
religiously
, one can broaden his horizons with great
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ease
, comfort and convenience.
Hence
, it is apparent why
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many
are in favor to this trend.

From what has
been discussed
above, it can
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be concluded
that, notwithstanding the drawbacks, the overwhelming benefits of
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reading
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books
are
indeed
too great to
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ignore
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV.

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