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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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We live in a world which has been tremendously shaped by the unparalleled advancements of technology and globalisation which in turn have revolutionised the way we live and make our choices- both little and big. Without any doubt, we have an incredible number of alternatives to pick from and this freedom of choice has enriched our lifestyle in the best possible way and it has also increased the global resources. The advancement of technology has enabled us to get accurate information from the internet anytime we want. We have an unimaginable number of resources online that we can access instantly and this freedom enables us to make informed decisions in every step in our life. We can decide what should be our next holiday destination, which store offers our favourites merchandise at a cheaper price, which university offers an online degree that we need and thus the potential to enrich our lives with the help of technology is virtually limitless. Other technological advancements have enabled us to grow more crops, cook new dishes, preserve them and reduce the world’s hunger issue more conveniently.
We
live
in a world which has been
tremendously
shaped by the unparalleled advancements of technology and
globalisation
which in turn have
revolutionised
the way we
live
and
make
our choices- both
little
and
big
. Without any doubt, we have an incredible number of alternatives to pick from and this freedom of choice has enriched our lifestyle in the best possible way and it has
also
increased the global resources.

The advancement of technology has enabled us to
get
accurate information from the internet anytime we want. We have an unimaginable number of resources online that we can access
instantly
and this freedom enables us to
make
informed decisions in every step in our life. We can decide what should be our
next
holiday destination, which store offers our
favourites
merchandise at a cheaper price, which university offers an online degree that we need and
thus
the potential to enrich our
lives
with the
help
of technology is
virtually
limitless. Other technological advancements have enabled us to grow more crops, cook new dishes, preserve them and
reduce
the world’s hunger issue more
conveniently
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
183 words
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