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Crime rate is generally higher in rural areas than urban. What do you think are the rooms and how this could be solved?

Crime rate is generally higher in rural areas than urban. What do you think are the rooms and how this could be solved? 9WMw
It has been confirmed sidered that violence rate is increased in outskirts area rather than city side. This essay will discuss some relevant reasons of crime rate along viable measures in further paragraphs. First and foremost, one of the prominent reason behind this which is illiteracy rate. This is because, there are no one person available who give right lesson of education at certain age where some individual find a way which is ielllegal and become a victim of crime to earn a money. For instance it has been some of the snatching and pick pockting casses at crowded places at a high rate. Moreover, the another reason is availability of security systems are weak due to less numbers of cops are there where more chances of robberies attemptions in three areas. Hence it would be become increase rate of crime by lack of education in impverished population.
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been confirmed
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that violence
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rate
is increased
in outskirts area
rather
than city side. This essay will discuss
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some
relevant reasons of crime
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along viable measures in
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First
and foremost, one of the prominent reason behind this which is illiteracy
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rate
. This is
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because
, there are no one person available who give right lesson of education at certain age where
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some
individual find a way which is
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ielllegal
and become a victim of crime to earn
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a money
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some of the
snatching and pick
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pockting
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casses
at crowded places at a high
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rate
.
Moreover
, the another reason is availability of security systems are weak due to
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less
numbers of cops are there where more chances of robberies
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attemptions
in three areas.
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Hence
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be become
increase
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rate
of crime by lack of education in
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impverished
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IELTS essay Crime rate is generally higher in rural areas than urban. What do you think are the rooms and how this could be solved?

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  American English
2 paragraphs
148 words
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